BROKEN ARROW

by Gremlin
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Slowly recording the next record. Was happy with how this one turned out so am sharing first.

Lyrics:
You did a swell job, kid
Of breaking me down
Alone I sit
Spiraling out of control
And my thoughts are bleached into white
I want to lie in the abyss of the impossible night
But still I wander the halls of our memories
Like a hunter all lost from the forest of trees

Where I just feel like a broken arrow
Stuck in your side for the rest of my life

Blank pages get filled
I don’t remember a thing
My awareness blew off
In the scattering of leaves
And these songs that I write they stalk my insides
As I stealth through the night with this burning inside
Though I know that there’s nothing left here for me
Still I launch this tired heart...watch it sail through the trees

For I just end up like a broken arrow
That’s stuck in your side for the rest of my life
Yea I just feel like a broken arrow
Stuck in your side for the rest of my life

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Playing time (m:ss): 2:59
Date uploaded: May 30, 2020, 14:24 EDT Show more info
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Rex Yehudi (shoham) gave feedback to Gremlin for “BROKEN ARROW”:
That's a jazzy piece of cover art! I'd like to hear a slow, walking bass line trailing this thing, like an old ghost tagging along with an unwitting host.

And maybe some very tasteful little fills on the last 3rd of the composition, electric guitar -- the high end of the spectrum.
 May 31, 2020, 09:02 EDT
Gremlin 
The tune itself is a ghost that has been haunting these old bones for years buddy haha!
flag (Jun 08, 2020, 12:12 EDT)
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
Did I sense that!?
flag (Jun 08, 2020, 17:40 EDT)