Click to
enable plugin →
Genres: Acoustic, Lo-Fi
Tags: Raum, Kyle, Cole, Obervations, Flight, Original

© 2019. All Rights Reserved
(Recently Updated with better vocals)

I decided to sit down and dedicate at least 30 minutes to writing a song where I would reach deep inside my emotional personification and complete it. After I got the chord stucture down I fleshed out the lyrics and I decided to do a a couple, literally 2 takes. I may post Take 1 and 2 here just to document the evolution of it, but I overall really like how this turned out. I really poured some emotion into it.

Lyrics:
[Verse 1]
Every day, the same old story
Feels just like, I'm in purgotory.
Running around with no purpose it seems.
What ever happened to all my dreams?

[Chorus]
I know they're somewhere, in my mind
But finding them will take time.

[Verse 2]
I see people, every day.
Running about, each and every way.
Do they know, where they go?
Do they care? Or want to know?

[Chorus]
I know they're somewhere, in my mind.
But finding them will take time.

[Middle Eighth]
Feels like my days on repeat.
Seems like my life's incomplete.
Without direction, the path is dark.
Won't you help me light the spark?

[Verse 3]
Now it's dark, I need to rest.
Try to make tomorrow my best.
When the morning comes, it starts again.
How I will feel, I won't know know until then.

[Chorus x 2]
I know they're somewhere, in my mind.
But finding them will take time.

I know they're somewhere, in my mind.
But finding them will take time.

Stream: 128 kbps, 44 kHz (joint stereo)
Download: 320.0 kbps, 44 kHz (joint stereo), 6.59 MB
Playing time (m:ss): 2:53
Date uploaded: Oct 21, 2019, 12:00 EDT Show more info
Please log in to do that!
Give feedback to Raum:
 
(You'll be prompted to log in or register.)
$


Sweet tune! Needs a whistle solo!
 Oct 24, 2019, 09:40 EDT
Raum 
Every song needs a whistle solo.
flag (Dec 04, 2019, 02:25 EST)
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
You can say that again!
flag (Dec 04, 2019, 08:42 EST)
Raum 
Got a special blank notebook from an old college friend. She made the cover out of vinyl. I've used that as my songwriting book and oh man is it full of original ideas. Even played some of my originals at a party and had people asking me who original sang some of the songs, lol
flag (Dec 04, 2019, 13:16 EST)
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
UP UP & AWAY!!!
flag (Dec 04, 2019, 17:42 EST)


I really like the lyrics and arrangement.
 Oct 21, 2019, 17:19 EDT
Raum 
Thank you Shiloh, I really appriciate that. I've been writing so much lately, I've almost filled up a whole notebook of ideas and songs. I really only record the ones I think are worthy enough.
flag (Oct 21, 2019, 19:49 EDT)