Better Man Demo

by Raum
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Genres: Acoustic, Lo-Fi, Folk-Rock
Tags: Better, Man, Raum, Cole, Kyle, Demo

License: FeedForward Collaboration License
Demo for a song I am working on. I like the way it feels.

Any advice on chord placement/flow, lyrics, and just how it overall feels please let me know.

Stream: 128 kbps, 44 kHz (joint stereo)
Download: 320.0 kbps, 44 kHz (joint stereo), 4.63 MB
Playing time (m:ss): 2:01
Date uploaded: Jan 15, 2019, 22:20 EST Show more info
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Rex Yehudi (shoham) gave feedback to Raum for “Better Man Demo”:
I like the unison vocals. Has a late 50s early 60s feel.

I think you should emphasize the minor chords a little more by changing the strum pattern when you change chords.

Then, I would extend those better man call and response lines in the outro, like a cannon or a round:

https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Round_(music)
 Jan 16, 2019, 10:52 EST
Omitted 4 posts.
Raum 
I love you Shoham.
flag (Jan 18, 2019, 02:42 EST)
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
I LOVE YOU MAN!
flag (Jan 18, 2019, 12:58 EST)
Raum 
Take 10 will be posted tonight. I took some of your advice and added another verse.
flag (Jan 24, 2019, 14:54 EST)
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
Righteous brother!
flag (Jan 24, 2019, 16:52 EST)


Raum gave feedback to Raum for “Better Man Demo”:
Also started a Beatle's reivew channel.

https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC3HIwVT5z1TOavRVccV8elQ/
 Jan 15, 2019, 22:25 EST