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Lyrics:
I'm done with New York
I say we're through
Yeah I see past your shattered windows like a small-town teenage dream

Strung out and bLUE York,
You'll never do

Now all your autumn leaves are drifting like my will to carry on

C-Section:

Outside your geese and cabbies honk
So now I'm cursin' Jonas Bronck

And still your leaves keep turning, just like the world I've left behind

I'm flying past your scrapers, and rising rents that just won't stop.
I say STOP!

Old crusty New York
I think you're cursed...

Well, if you wanted to destroy me should have got to know me first

Good bye to new York
And now it seems

That all your autumn leaves are drifting, like the ashes of my dreams...

MP3: 320.0 kbps, 44 kHz (joint stereo), 6.05 MB
Playing time (m:ss): 2:38
Date uploaded: Nov 25, 2018, 11:59 EST Show more info
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Kode of Bliss gave feedback to shoham for “Autumn LEAVES (WIP)”:
As usual you have nice lyrics and there is a great song in there, but the recording is pretty overdriven and hard on the ears. I can help you with some mixing and mastering.
 Dec 07, 2018, 15:33 EST
shoham 
right on man. i was SOOOOOoooooooooooooooooo close to getting a really good friend/guitarist/technical assistant to help me do a bunch of these this summer -- fell through :( Thanks for the listen!
flag (Dec 07, 2018, 17:26 EST)


Richard Shekari gave feedback to shoham for “Autumn LEAVES (WIP)”:
New York ain't done with you, buddy. 😁
Love the guitar work there
 Nov 28, 2018, 03:22 EST
shoham 
Jajaja! Awful recording but I am glad you saw through it. Thank you very much for the listen. I am looking forward to taking your advice and getting into a studio next year!
flag (Nov 28, 2018, 11:34 EST)
Richard Shekari 
I think you should buy some good equipment and record from home. this way, we don't get to lose songs that you just record as samples for fun.
flag (Dec 04, 2018, 08:50 EST)
shoham 
I was very close to some this summer. Long story... To me abject failure would be no recording. I give these no-fi's a D- grade but not total failure...
flag (Dec 04, 2018, 16:13 EST)


Gremlin gave feedback to shoham for “Autumn LEAVES (WIP)”:
Very cool tune man!

Digging the chords throughout. Almost envision the final recording done in a style similar to this:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KcGb24n9hvM

Maybe this should get a remix from the ol Grem.
 Nov 27, 2018, 14:34 EST
shoham 
I hadn't heard of olde roky before. I will have to check some of his stuff out. Thanks for listening, this was a bad recording even for me! I need to bare down and get into a studio, the problem is I am not with a band or accompanists and am camera shy on the guitar. But I will definitely take your suggestion to heart, since I think I need a strategy for arrangements when I finally put something like ore substantive together.
flag (Nov 27, 2018, 17:18 EST)
shoham 
If by remix you mean a cover, that would be nice! I could shoot you the chords and lyrics.
flag (Nov 27, 2018, 17:19 EST)
Gremlin 
He was a member of the psych rock group 13th Floor Elevators. My friend from Austin grew up living down the street from him. Apparently by that point he was pretty nuts from all the LSD and stuff. Kinda sad. Made some good music though. Haha yea I was thinking a cover, then again I am at work on some stuff of my own, so may be next year before I get to one.
flag (Nov 30, 2018, 09:36 EST)
shoham 
Seems like a nut. Yeah that would be cool. If you ever get up to ittsburgh (or if I get down to Huntington we'll have to jam/record/epic!)
flag (Nov 30, 2018, 11:18 EST)
Gremlin 
I am always down for a jam session
flag (Dec 03, 2018, 12:19 EST)