Charred Bills

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Stream: 128 kbps, 44 kHz (joint stereo)
Download: 320.0 kbps, 44 kHz (joint stereo), 7.69 MB
Playing time (m:ss): 3:22
Date uploaded: Aug 11, 2015, 11:56 EDT Show more info
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Rex Yehudi (shoham) gave feedback to J. Wager for “Charred Bills”:
Great guitar work. I wanted to put this one to the side and come back to it after a couple of days. At first I thought that the vocals needed work, and I still do, but in fairness, I feel like you should commit to a lower register, rather than just write back that 'they need work', because I think that aside from being too vague, it's something more precise -- lower register and more artculation on the individual syllables that you are singing. It's a good set of lyrics, but I'm missing them and the melody because it's a little rushed. Cool start!
 Aug 14, 2015, 12:03 EDT
J. Wager 
Yeah man I've been working more in a lower register, feels more natural that way. Still needs al ot of improvement but i'm getting there. Thanks for listening !
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Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
keep up with it -- it's paying off. -Shoham
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