“Deep Breath”

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▼ Genres: Alt-Rock, Rock, Punk

It's been awhile. . .

Lyrics:
These empty streets are keeping me from where I need to be
These red lights are slowing me down from ever leaving this town
I know everybody says it, but it still rings true
I just want to grab you your hand and run away with you

They say we’ll never make it alive
Don’t believe their lies

Deep breath and let the rest come easy
I know you’re scared but please believe me
Just look into my eyes
I know you’re scared, I know you’re tired
But in the end we’ll it there

One more time into the unknown
I promised you we’d find a new home
I know it’s getting dark, and this is only the start

Just don’t let go of my hand
I promised you a new land

Deep breath and let the rest come easy
I know you’re scared but please believe me
Just look into my eyes
I know you’re scared, I know you’re tired
But in the end we’ll it there

Stream: 128 kbps, 44 kHz (joint stereo)
Download: 145.0 kbps, 44 kHz (joint stereo), 3.43 MB
Playing time (m:ss): 3:18
Date uploaded: Mar 06, 2015, 13:06 EST Show more info
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.. Deep Breath

Rex Yehudi (shoham) gave feedback to Karmawimp for “Deep Breath”:
You guys are getting stronger, especially rhythmically. Very impressive. Also, I notice a lot of new strength in your vocals and songwriting skills, not to mention your production quality. Its like really high quality pop-punk, now!

I think that you could continue to improve how you are incorporating the vocals. It might be my headphones, but the vocals sound too soft for me...

Thank you,
-$shoham
 Mar 09, 2015, 12:02 EDT
Karmawimp 
Thank you for the feed back! It really means a lot. Since we don't know any drummers at the moment, we have been looking into alternatives. For this song I was able to find an artist who sells albums of drum tracks for people to use in their own music. I have also been really looking at the art of recording, trying to get the most out of my instruments with what I have access to, which isn't very much!
In regards to the softness of the vocals, you are probably correct. I'm still trying to figure out this whole mixing business!
As always, thank you for the support!
Memmott
flag (Mar 09, 2015, 12:31 EDT)
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
very nice. i think that you guys are well on your way to greatness! are you two still working remotely? thanks -$shoham
flag (Mar 10, 2015, 14:37 EDT)
Karmawimp 
Yes. I'm still in California, and Roger is still in Arizona. By now, we have definitely gotten a better grasp on how to go about our recording and such. We have a few more songs we are working on at the moment that we are pretty excited about.
flag (Mar 10, 2015, 14:53 EDT)
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
Well, slow but steady as they say. Good work, guys! $Shoham

flag (Mar 10, 2015, 14:57 EDT)
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