Pretty cool stuff, dude! I like this third eyeball in the middle of your dude's face. Hahaha. Are you ever going to turn this into a movie or anything, or just let us all read between the lines???
This actually might become a small graphic novel or even animation project given my current resources, but I am not yet sure I've quite nailed my style yet, you know?
I like where things are going, for sure, nonetheless. Maybe start by writing down some plot lines? I might send you some thought if you don't mind? I would have to think about it a bit. Shoham