This is a great composition! Awesome! I like some of the word that you made up like "No money, no show"! Better than the original.
Bets part is the harmonies that you came up. When we did this one live, we got pretty good harmonies, then when we tried to get a "studio" version we couldn't get them right -- but you got them right my friend, oh you got them right all right!
Wala