Yeah, buddy! Is this one with harmonies? Sounds a lot better, thouhg the original was awesome as well!
Again, loving this Walkmen cum Roy Orbison sound you've got going on this one.
What exactly is this keyboard that you are using? I would really recommend that you send tis track into your local college radio station, or better hand it in yourself, and maybe listen to it with the DJ's -- I think this one could be a hit!!!