Genre: Poetry
Tags: Sonnet

License: FeedForward Collaboration License
Date uploaded: Sep 04, 2011, 14:10 EDT Show more info
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Chase Risinger gave feedback to 0ctavio G0nzalez for “I told her”:
sexy, i really like the imagery, "big bird yellow" is great. also like the simile of thicker than a bag of funyon rings, kind of makes me feel satisfied but sick as well, what is this about?
 Jun 18, 2012, 01:40 EDT
0ctavio G0nzalez 
Hey, man thanks for reading! This is a very personal work for me. Hard for ME to put my finger on just what it's about. I guess the best way for me to explain would be to ask if you've ever gone back to your elementary school, or seen your first crush ten years later and thought "Is this it? I thought it was bigger/she was prettier!!!" Like nostalgia gone wrong. TL;DR Thanks for reading!
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