Beginning reminds me a lot of "Say It Ain't So", and the whole song has a Wheezer feel in that it's fun.
I think that the production value could be helped out with some kind of percussion, live or electronic.
Very cool lyrics, and I especially like the harmonies. I think that I would redo the harmonica, I feel as if it might be in the wrong key.
Cool tune-- I like the fade out!