gave feedback to platypus
The vocals surprised me after hearing the guitar intro, but that's a good thing! You have a fun to listen to singing voice, did you record this live with the acoustic guitar? Or did you record the guitar separately? If you want some minor feedback I would say try recording guitar first to a metronome as there were some (maybe intentional?) hard tempo fluctuations going on, but ultimately it sounded good and fun! I enjoyed listening through the whole thing, and I thought it was pretty good!