Rex Yehudi (shoham) gave feedback to Xack Fischer for “Complications”:
"but I think that it's my path
I've been working it out and double checking my math
I've added it up, and divided by two
I don't think that I'm meant to end up with you"

A great quatrain. Something of an Ogden Nash quality to it...

I think the buh, buh, buh's should be "love, love, love", but in that same dejected voice. Thanks, X, -Z
 Jun 26, 2013, 15:13 EDT
Xack Fischer 
I love love love that idea and I am absolutely going to change it.
flag (Jun 26, 2013, 15:16 EDT)
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
Wow! I am pumped that it works for you! Anything I can do for a fellow artist and songwriter is my pleasure :[o]
flag (Jun 26, 2013, 15:18 EDT)
Xack Fischer 
Look for your name in the liner notes if I ever put out an album! ;)
flag (Jun 26, 2013, 15:23 EDT)
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
awesome! i would be honored, and i hope you reach that goal!
:[0] -saz
flag (Jun 26, 2013, 15:37 EDT)