Airy stuff. I like it, Chris!

I feel as if the composition and performance is very solid. I like the direction you took it around 1:45 -- very true to what I think the concept is based on the tags and title. Cool use of the chorus effect on this track. I like the little drum rolls as well.

I feel as if you could add a bit more texture starting somewhere around 3:15 or so, keep building it up more until the change at 3:31.

I also dig the tension that you build here down the stretch and the finale. I like where this is going, man, keep going!

Thank you,
Shoham
 May 16, 2013, 10:56 EDT
Chris Hoffmeister 
Thanks! As always your advice is very helpful and appreciated!
flag (May 16, 2013, 12:46 EDT)
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
cool! i'm looking forward to what comes next!
flag (May 16, 2013, 15:02 EDT)