Rex Yehudi (shoham) gave feedback to David Samuel Partamian for “Six”:
This one is really my style. I like rhyming a lot and this one of the three has the best scheme. Very dark and symbolic, though I liked the others as well, even the more direct "The Fall". Something about this one though was very nice for me.

Thanks,
-Shoham
 Aug 11, 2012, 20:46 EDT
David Samuel Partamian 
Thanks, this one was my favorite of the bunch as well.. it's just that I have quite a number of poems, and I tried to pick three very different ones to be representative of very different states of mind I have been in while writing them.
flag (Aug 12, 2012, 16:29 EDT)
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
Great minds... ;)
flag (Aug 12, 2012, 16:43 EDT)


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