Gabrielle gave feedback to Chris Hoffmeister for “Delusion's Illusion”:
Really pretty in the beginning and exciting then erie in the middle. I think the first part going into the second is a good transition since it slowly builds, but the second part has so much drama that going back into the first part towards the end maybe needs a more gradual transition to ease back into it, if that makes sense. If they will be three separate songs, though, they compliment each other well.
 Jul 15, 2012, 21:43 EDT
Chris Hoffmeister 
Thanks for the input! Yeah, I definitely want to add more voices to the overall mix but basically I want to extend the beginning, add some different instruments to the first build up so it's not so repetitive and I'm not too sure what to do with the middle as of yet. I was kind of toying with the idea of keeping it so dramatic with a sudden ending, have that fade out and into the beginning melody but i'll mess around with your idea, see if I can come up with anything good.
flag (Jul 16, 2012, 21:33 EDT)
Gabrielle 
oh yeah, I really liked the voices. Forgot to mention that.
flag (Jul 17, 2012, 22:26 EDT)