Rex Yehudi (shoham) gave feedback to platypus for “Sever”:
Cool tune. I like the bluesy vibe on this one. Would like to hear a more polished version of the tune, but I think you are definitely on the right 'track' shall we say(?) with this one...

Just curious, are there any lyrics for this one, or are you writing them up still? As a song writer myself, I know that I do that. Sounds like it could be one such case.

Thanks for sharing!
-Shoham
 Mar 01, 2012, 12:36 EST
platypus 
It's a song that feels like it needs a band behind it. So i'm going to say this is my acoustic version, and ya the lyrics to this mofo change daily, trying to focus on the "er" sound in the chorus. My next big musical step is going to be getting some people to play my songs with me but it is hard to find the right people.
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Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
Oh yeah. That's for sure. Well, hopefully you can work well with those you do find. I've been in a lot of bands, and getting everyone to get along is by far the greatest challenge you'll face :o
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