Daryl C. Hill gave feedback to Rex Yehudi (shoham) for “WWBD”:
Shoham,

You said that you wanted to make this more effective. I am not sure what, exactly, you mean. The red/black full screens are very effective. Esp. in full screen mode. Don't use me as a ruler for this but I did have trouble reading the captions. I always have trouble reading movie credits.

Ripping Blossoms face out and replacing it with the monster's face was a nice touch. I don't know what Blossom will have to say about it, though. Could it be that you do not have the license that allows derogation of her likeness?

Having the Blossom figure and card move about the screen was also a cool effect.

Looking forward to new things from your new software.

Daryl
 Dec 22, 2011, 19:22 EST
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
Thank you sir! I've got to work on getting better shots of the captions! Will be working now that I've got some inspiration ;p Merry Holidays :)
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Daryl C. Hill 
I thought that you might have been doing the obtuse captioning with a purpose in mind. I find that I am much better at cheer leading than at critique. You do venture into the obtuse on occasion.

Again, the very Blood Red, then Black screens, are great!!

Barbara says to please say hi and the she is waiting for part II of Chapter One.

Hope you have a good, normally, I would say, Christmas, but will just say have a very nice New Year!

Daryl
flag (Dec 22, 2011, 22:27 EST)
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
Hey, DCH, I have some new works up -- a vid, I could use your help with: http://www.feed-forward.net/w.5329_Thoughts_on_a_college_education_WIP_for_ It's a sonnet :]
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