Man, some bad ass narrator you are, Sho!
This is good. I love the strong technical words you put up;
- cryogenic freezing
-rigeur mortis

Teach me your technique, Master.
I will be Jacky Chan and you will be the Drunken master.
Keep it up, man. See, you've got a lot to share with the world after all.
 Jan 11, 2017, 04:28 EST
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
JaJaJa. I think that it is just stream of consciousness, tapping into some anger about the Technocracy. I was surprised, I ran this through a word count tool and they told me that it was at the 12th grade level. So you are right I guess about the technique. Thanks for reading. Stay angry while writing. And keep it short!
flag (Jan 11, 2017, 11:47 EST)
Richard Shekari 
Wow, what's a word count tool and what does 12th grade level mean?
Word count it some Microsoft word usual word count thingy or just some extra tool for checking up things. I don't really care much about how who sees or perceives it, i just write what comes to mind, that's all. then wait for critics in order to improve on next work. Hope you keep writing
flag (Jan 13, 2017, 07:42 EST)
Rex Yehudi (shoham) I just wanted to know how many words it was up to. Since I wrote it in notepad.
flag (Jan 13, 2017, 09:46 EST)
Richard Shekari 
Whoa dude. All you need do is type in Microsoft word and it'll show your word count at the bottom left corner. Happy weekend
flag (Jan 15, 2017, 08:22 EST)
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
Yeah, but I use notepad for writing. Less extras. Did you see this movie: It reminded me of this conversation you and I are having -- everyone writes and produces in a different way! I was just answering since you asked what technique I used to write this chapter......
flag (Jan 15, 2017, 09:18 EST)
Richard Shekari 
The thing is your technique is fresh, unique and I've got to admit, superb. I was expecting the usual sh*t and then you nuked me off my damn feet. Keep it up, and please tell me you are still writing and not that you just treated that story like one of those 'usual' thing and act like it's not worth your precious time. I just finished one, The Unifier. Still going through it though, once done I'd put it up
flag (Jan 18, 2017, 03:57 EST)
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
Unifier. Sounds intense!!! The problem for me is I hardly have the discipline to focus in on reading a story let alone writing one. ADHD -- my KRYPTONITE!
flag (Jan 18, 2017, 11:13 EST)
Richard Shekari 
I hate reading. Trully. But when the story comes i won't find peace until it's puked out lol. I guess that means you refused to finish your sci-fi
flag (Jan 18, 2017, 23:29 EST)
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
let's just call it a.. work in progress... -- aren't we all??!!

PS: Part II coming soon.....
flag (Jan 19, 2017, 06:49 EST)