Rex Yehudi (shoham) gave feedback to Richard Shekari for “(deleted)”:
Getting into this thing now -- did you change anything since the last draft? I like how you are jumping back and forth in time. I'm still looking forward to getting to read it cover to cover i the next few days!!! Shoham
 Oct 07, 2016, 11:38 EDT
Richard Shekari 
Just a little change and some lines added to best smoothen it. Nothing much. Story still the same. Thanks a lot, you actually inspired me to write his one. I know you will be too busy to read haha
flag (Oct 07, 2016, 11:42 EDT)
Richard Shekari 
Hope you are doing good
flag (Oct 07, 2016, 11:43 EDT)
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
I am just a slow reader of I would be done already. Never too busy for a fiend... Shoham
flag (Oct 08, 2016, 11:10 EDT)

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