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chocodum gave feedback to Bojko for “Any More”:
Some of your higher notes do not reach all the way. Some of your longer held notes are also kind of shaky. I love the static rythm of this piece.
 Mar 06, 2012, 22:38 EST
Bojko 
yeah this one I have to work out a lot more, this was like a super rough demo, just so I wouldn't forget what I was thinking thanks so much for the feedback!!
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The lowest notes are not fully reached. And also there's giggling, although that's completely fine, as this seems like a pretty relaxed song. Great job!
 Mar 06, 2012, 23:03 EST
Pattern Break 
Haha, your comment made me laugh, "...also there's giggling, although that's completely fine!" Definitely a relaxed song, done in one take, more or less improvised on the spot. Thanks for listening : )
flag (Mar 09, 2012, 05:48 EST)


chocodum gave feedback to The Airvents for “Tell You Anything”:
The song sped up noticably when the drums came in, who are also too loud compared to the singer. Yes, the drums has an inconsistent timefield throughout the song. Vocals are also occasionally off-tune here and there.
 Mar 06, 2012, 22:59 EST
The Airvents 
Thank you for the Feedback. We have been working on that. Thank you again for your feedback. We hope you continue to check up on us.
Tyler- Drummer
flag (Mar 07, 2012, 00:32 EST)


chocodum gave feedback to Nickle Sky for “Nickle Sky - Minimumless”:
The fourth measure began a bit too early. The drums are also too loud and overpowers the vocal. Also I think "Tell me" is a bit repetitive in the middle there. The vocals seem perfect other than the fact that it's too quiet though.
 Mar 06, 2012, 22:54 EST