Nice ambient production. I was definitely imagining some Korean Pop music at 1st because of your name.
Also enjoyed the mix of rock and rap. Maybe consider brining the vocals in at the same time as the rapping at some point in the track to highlight the juxtaposition.
Definitely a strong Strokes vibe courtesy the distorted vocals. A fun little indie homage to some late 2000s alt sounds. Some professional recording and engineering would set this off.