I liked the overall sound of this track. You have a good voice, and the backing track had an interesting "wandering" sound to it. (not a lot of mainstream rap has that quality in my opinion) Some SMALL negative criticisms that I have are the lack of a significant climax, but that is strictly coming from my personal taste. It feels like the song just sort of ends. This is a small issue though, and does very little to take from the song. Well done.