Genre: Poetry
Tags: Sonnet, John Donne, Mystic

License: FeedForward Collaboration License
Sorry for bad English :(
Date uploaded: Aug 28, 2011, 08:18 EDT Show more info
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Gabrielle gave feedback to 0ctavio G0nzalez for “Ode on Influence”:
I'm not very good at analyzing poetry, but the parts I understand in your poem are really beautiful!
 Aug 09, 2012, 00:00 EDT
0ctavio G0nzalez 
iMuchos gracias! Lo sientos, no hablo Englais.
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Has some real potential. A little bit jagged at times, but when you're trying to get so many ideas into such a precise form, things can get jagged.

Really impressed that you're going for this kind of classicism.

Kind of reminds me of John Donne!

thanks,
-uncle showie
 Jun 17, 2012, 14:15 EDT


Weird, but I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing, -Shoham
 Apr 03, 2012, 08:00 EDT


Bojko gave feedback to 0ctavio G0nzalez for “Ode on Influence”:
I like it very much... I want to call it Beautiful!!!! great poetry dude!
 Jan 09, 2012, 05:13 EST
0ctavio G0nzalez 
hahaha, thanks. You can keep a copy :D
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Kode of Bliss gave feedback to 0ctavio G0nzalez for “Ode on Influence”:
Nice poetry. Didn't really notice any bad English, wasn't looking very hard, just reading it for what it is.
 Sep 26, 2011, 13:24 EDT
0ctavio G0nzalez 
Thanks. I thought that it was fine, but English isn't my first language.
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WalaWalaWala gave feedback to 0ctavio G0nzalez for “Ode on Influence”:
Cool! Reminds me a lot of "The Holy Sonnets" by John Donne!

Right on, man :)

-Shoham
 Aug 28, 2011, 10:18 EDT