This track is so damn close. I agree that the vocal delivery needs just a bit more- but this track has the potential to be a pure simmer-to-boil explosion. I think I said this on a previous track, but this really cries out for more voices. Also, I think at the start of the track, the vocals almost come off a a bit goofy- it took me about 45 seconds in before I really grasped the direction this song was headed. To me, this song just needs some polish, some tlc, and it could knock the socks of people- it has a ton of potential, but its not quite there yet. I would say don't let this one rest on its laurels- keep tinkering with it until you are satisfied.