Two minute magic! I don't really see anything wrong with it. It's lo-fi, which is a matter of preference, but I wouldn't over-produce it either...

"Chuck, Chuck! It's Marvin! Your cousin, Marvin Berry! You know that new sound you were looking for? Well listen to THIS!"
 Aug 19, 2019, 07:46 EDT


Nice rendition.

MORE NEW SONGS!!!
 Aug 16, 2019, 07:14 EDT
Raum 
Does Shoham demand originals? I have a few but i just feel they are trash...
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Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
MAKE IT SO...
flag (Aug 16, 2019, 08:42 EDT)
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
Don't stash the trash...
flag (Aug 16, 2019, 08:43 EDT)
Raum 
Man I love you, Shoham. Alright, i meed to catch up on some rest and ill start working on recording them soon.
flag (Aug 16, 2019, 08:46 EDT)
Raum 
Well. As promised. Here is the start of the trash dump ;)

flag (Aug 18, 2019, 23:50 EDT)


Raum gave feedback to Raum for “Ob-la-di, ob-la-da (Cover)”:
Got the damn levels wrong. Oh well.
 Aug 16, 2019, 04:15 EDT


Is this puppy an original? Sweet tune either way. Nice guitar work. Pump up the volume on the vocals, please sir.

Maybe your most mature work ever? If this is the future of rock and roll --- sign me UP! After last chord maybe give it a bum-bum-bum-bum baaah bass-line...

$Shoham
 Jul 01, 2019, 08:54 EDT
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Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
NICE! Did not know of this Crickets, sans Buddy Holly tune. Yeah, it's such a balance between no-fi, lo-fi, and on the other end just the bonkersness off overproduced stuff. Even when I am trying my best to get good recordings and I have in the past, (not right now...) it is such a crap shoot for me, which is why in my frustration I have been doing these no-fis for a few years now. KEEP EXPERIMENTING!!!!
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Raum 
I am seeing that experimenting is the direction I am leading towards.
flag (Aug 15, 2019, 16:51 EDT)
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
Don't stop, EVER _
flag (Aug 15, 2019, 19:05 EDT)
Raum 
Got some new ones up.
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Rex Yehudi (shoham) gave feedback to Raum for “Move it on Over”:
This needs a ''response'' backup vocal track in the background -- multiple voices responding to the 'on-over parts'

Be thorough, be good, but if you get a 'hank'ering for the original 'dog', move it on over here:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-Lza3NVH6Ig

It's a good start, though...
 Aug 10, 2019, 17:51 EDT
Raum 
Oh man, this is definitely a version i could do a whole lot better! Thsnk you!
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Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
So Lonesome I Could Cry is a good track too... Keep it 🆙
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Rex Yehudi (shoham) gave feedback to Raum for “Lonesome Tears in my Eyes”:
Lovin' the vocal tech. Needs a low-end. You could play it on the E-String on your guitar on another track and merge it in, some kind of tex-mex bassline... Maybe an electric solo over the top?!
 Aug 10, 2019, 20:55 EDT


Rex Yehudi (shoham) gave feedback to Raum for “Only Know Four Chords”:
Maybe your best. Serendipity! This is maybe a new way 'forward'... FEED ME!
 Aug 05, 2019, 07:25 EDT
Raum 
I tried coolying your style of writing
:)
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Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
Cooly it 🆙
flag (Aug 05, 2019, 09:06 EDT)
Raum 
Im trying to branch my writing out to be more off the cuff rather than regurgitate the same lyrical format of "I love you/want you".
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Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
Sweet. Next stop: Hitsville!
flag (Aug 07, 2019, 06:15 EDT)
Raum 
Hitsville, LP county.
flag (Aug 07, 2019, 09:25 EDT)


This was written by Del Shannon... but it is Merseybeat....
 Aug 05, 2019, 07:27 EDT
Raum 
Shit you're right but didn't Gordon sing it?
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Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
A world without 💘 singer... Same
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Raum 
I got confused because this has the same chord structure of A World Without Love which Paul wrote for Peter and Gordon.
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Loki gave feedback to Raum for “Better Man Than Me”:
Sounds great man ✌️
 Apr 21, 2019, 12:40 EDT
Raum 
Really appreciate that!
flag (Jul 01, 2019, 15:29 EDT)


I can't believe I had never heard this song before! It's a nice treatment, especially in the vocals. Definitely am happy with your approach to production these days 😂
 May 22, 2019, 07:30 EDT
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
Working on a musical response to this, in the nicetime I thought you might enjoy this newy: https://www.feed-forward.net/w.7228_Checklist_Charlies_Last_Hurrah
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