A lot to say about this, because you are saying a lot in this. The first thing that REALLY popped out for me was on page 5: "This is why there are 12 notes in the musical scale (and I feel one is missing, due to 3.14x 4 = 12.52)"
Over time, I want to work with this in our rehearsals and recording sessions, there's A LOT to this.
I'm going to give you some constructive criticism that you could take a few ways: I don't think that it's a problem that you are jumping around with ideas, but some of your grammar AND spelling is sloppy. That only works stylistically for me if you are (1) Going for a VERY 'raw' narrative voice and or if you think it just doesn't matter -- but that's nihilistic and your theories are the exact opposite. I feel as if you need to go back over all 14 pages and find the dozen or so areas that are the most egregious. More to say!
Very rich source material you are providing here and I love that you are being so bold with the way you are throwing the kitchen sink at your audience: "Here is the TRUTH -- deal with it". Unfiltered. BUT... You need to go ver the entire piece and clean up your grammar or it gets lost and your work looks disorganized which is NOT what you want...
Page 10: "we need every artist in the world to come together to save it." -- I'm sorry, is there an echo in here?!?
Thanks for sharing your ideas!