good build. tells a little bi of a story, w/o words or pics. cool.
 Aug 31, 2015, 10:03 EDT


Rex Yehudi (shoham) gave feedback to Raum for “Uh... Wots the Deal?”:
wot *is* the deal!!!??? Where is MY cover? LOL. I like the production you layered onto your vox.
 Aug 28, 2015, 07:56 EDT


Rex Yehudi (shoham) gave feedback to Ryan Toth for “synergy3”:
transitions work better in this version, because of the underlying percussion track you added. I think that this version flows much better all around.

Still, the opening is coming out a little weak, in my mind. Need more bass earlier on, even before the percussion track rolls in.

-Shoham
 Aug 27, 2015, 07:08 EDT


Rex Yehudi (shoham) gave feedback to J. Wager for “Charred Bills”:
Great guitar work. I wanted to put this one to the side and come back to it after a couple of days. At first I thought that the vocals needed work, and I still do, but in fairness, I feel like you should commit to a lower register, rather than just write back that 'they need work', because I think that aside from being too vague, it's something more precise -- lower register and more artculation on the individual syllables that you are singing. It's a good set of lyrics, but I'm missing them and the melody because it's a little rushed. Cool start!
 Aug 14, 2015, 12:03 EDT
J. Wager 
Yeah man I've been working more in a lower register, feels more natural that way. Still needs al ot of improvement but i'm getting there. Thanks for listening !
flag (Aug 23, 2015, 18:55 EDT)
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
keep up with it -- it's paying off. -Shoham
flag (Aug 24, 2015, 14:17 EDT)


Rex Yehudi (shoham) gave feedback to J. Wager for “Derailed”:
cool harmonies starting at 1:07. tune has a sort of a 'raga' vibe -- what does 'rasa mean', exactly? vox sound string on this track as well -- keep working on finding your spots, I think you have a good an distinct timber to your voice and when you match it up with the emotive quality of your melodies and lyrics, something special happens/

Thanks,
-$Shoham
 Aug 21, 2015, 08:42 EDT
J. Wager 
Hey thanks for listening glad ya like it! Not too entirely sure what Rasa means, a friend tells me it's a Hindi word equating to nirvana, but one really never knows!
flag (Aug 23, 2015, 18:55 EDT)
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
it looks like it is like a religious state of ecstasy https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rasa_(theology)
flag (Aug 24, 2015, 14:16 EDT)


Rex Yehudi (shoham) gave feedback to Ryan Toth for “Synergy”:
I think it takes too long to build. You need a counterpoint earlier than 45" in. Maybe right off the back. Also, more a one-y-and-a-two-y-and-a bass line once everything kicks into place around 1:22.

There's a lot of good ideas on this track, maybe too many...

I know you don't do PayPal, but I could through you some AC if you list that way...?
 Aug 21, 2015, 08:50 EDT
Ryan Toth 
In my head, when played live I could slowly start with my synth being ambient with some arpegiated nonsense that morphed into those key parts. Basically left me some room to improv some noise.
flag (Aug 21, 2015, 16:16 EDT)
Ryan Toth 
and don't pay me shit for this. it feels so wrong. just.. share it, or enjoy it. that's all I want.
flag (Aug 21, 2015, 16:17 EDT)
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
I believe you get what you pay for... any live shows in the works? an cannot live on Ad Credits alone, you know...!
flag (Aug 21, 2015, 18:27 EDT)


Rex Yehudi (shoham) gave feedback to Alice Hagenbruch for “Heimat”:
Pretty spot. I just came from a similar place, which to me is ironic on a cosmic level, since looking up "heimat", it says something about people 'being together' -- which I feel as if walking in nature helps people do!

Danke Schoen!
-$Shoham
 Aug 21, 2015, 15:30 EDT


Rex Yehudi (shoham) gave feedback to tawmy for “M.A.D. 2015”:
anthemic tune. i listened to both versions and like the updated one better -- especially the rhythm track.
 Aug 18, 2015, 14:12 EDT
tawmy 
Thanks Shoham ... I'm just working on a better mix of the new version.
flag (Aug 18, 2015, 16:59 EDT)
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
sweet. what are your objective with the upcoming mix? -Shoham
flag (Aug 19, 2015, 07:29 EDT)
tawmy 
I have a few leads to get it into a film or two, and also give it away on my website ...
flag (Aug 20, 2015, 23:29 EDT)
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
cool stuff -- what kind of films? you're in Canada right? I know a lot of movies get made up there.
flag (Aug 21, 2015, 07:32 EDT)


I think I missed this tune. Different sound for you. has a sort of a 'tears for fears' quality to it.

I like the contrast between the chorus and verse, but not the transitions -- too choppy. Especially the first one. -Shoham
 Aug 19, 2015, 10:44 EDT


Rex Yehudi (shoham) gave feedback to Ryan Toth for “jokes on you”:
weird syncopation. knew direction for you? interesting ideas -- i like this. very forward thinking.
 Aug 13, 2015, 21:32 EDT

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