Rex Yehudi (shoham) gave feedback to Richard Shekari for “(deleted)”:
Just bought a copy. Looking forward to reading the book.

One thing that I ave already noticed that I like, having flipped through and read a bit is that there is a lot of very strong imagery, throughout. I bit poetic!

Takes a songwriter to write a novel in this way!

Looking forward to reading more,
 Jun 18, 2015, 12:01 EDT
Richard Shekari 
wow now i think i really don't deserve all these, i am speechless Shoham.
I lack words to express how i feel right now, wow!
i am so so so! thanks for your profound support
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Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
Artists need to work together man! One suggestion, some people don't have a PayPal, so consider aloowing people to buy with AC (Ad Credits as well). Just a thought. 1 Ad Credit is equal to about 10 cents (20 Naira). Pass it on... -Shoham
flag (Jun 18, 2015, 16:00 EDT)
Richard Shekari 
yes you are right but i haven't even checked how the AC stuff works
flag (Jun 18, 2015, 18:40 EDT)
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
Well, try making an ad, with the credits you already have. Free. -S
flag (Jun 19, 2015, 16:45 EDT)

Gremlin gave feedback to Ted Kindig for “(deleted)”:
I am in my 20's and balding, so feel your pain. Baldness is typically due to too much testosterone, so in effect, we are too manly for hair. :)


 Oct 27, 2014, 20:05 EDT

JZC gave feedback to Ted Kindig for “(deleted)”:
nice! My husband is bald and I read it to him. he says "brother I feel your pain" :)
 Jul 23, 2014, 22:42 EDT

Rex Yehudi (shoham) gave feedback to Ted Kindig for “(deleted)”:
wow. that's nice. very true, very true. was this in Lansing MI?

 Jul 11, 2014, 11:39 EDT

Very nice. You've got to take risks to get rewards.
 May 28, 2014, 10:32 EDT

JZC gave feedback to Barbara for “Time”:
what a profound piece. I realized I commented on this 2 years ago, yes the past 2 years have gone so fast. would love to see some of your new work.
 May 27, 2014, 19:24 EDT

Gabrielle gave feedback to Bojko for “Little Genius (May 22nd 2011)”:
I like this one. Were these written as poems or as songs that you were going to add music to later?
 Mar 10, 2014, 20:56 EDT
Thanks!!! most of them are just poems but may someday be songs or part of songs
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Rex Yehudi (shoham) gave feedback to Bojko for “February 3rd 2014”:
sad but true, $Bojko sad, but true.

Things have changed indeed...

 Feb 16, 2014, 20:14 EST

The Closers gave feedback to Bojko for “2-7-2014”:
Awesome :) What does it all mean???? Too cool. Thank you.
 Feb 08, 2014, 08:11 EST
I dunno what it meant it was straight up a dream I had a few nights ago lol ."Trigger Cut/Wounded-Kite at :17" is a song by the band Pavement
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Gabrielle gave feedback to Ted Kindig for “Afterlife”:
This is interesting. So you think that there is no actual afterlife-one chance to make whatever impact on the world that you want? Or that your intangible impact becomes tangible? Maybe I'm reading into it wrong, but it did make me think, and was very poetically written!
 Jan 29, 2014, 17:44 EST