i think some of the best stuff on the internet are here, really cool stuff.
tried to work from 9-5
tried to make it on my own...
yeah we will all survive it
i love the insight in this song, though simple instrumentals but very deep words in there.
keep it up
 Jun 19, 2015, 03:03 EDT
Wow! Most people don't listen to lyrics. Very nice -- thanks! Free album w/some more tracks: https://www.feed-forward.net/a.5_The_Rise_of_Kolkata_ I wrote the lyrics when I was having some problems with the boss at one of my first jobs. he was squirting us with a water gun to try and make us work faster. I didn't last very long there...
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Richard Shekari gave feedback to Carlston Meziere for “Red Hot Harmonics”:
cool rock
not much of a rock fan seriously but to be honest i love this.
keep up the good work CM, i will come back for more for sure.
 Jun 19, 2015, 03:13 EDT

Richard Shekari gave feedback to The Closers for “Lolly”:
i gotta admit this song is yummy for the mind.
i love the sound, the flow and the the rhythm.
catchy too, not a rock fan but i think you got me shaking me head imagining i got long hairs haha
oh this is good and superb
 Jun 18, 2015, 18:49 EDT
The Closers 
Well, you can use it for a hook if you are looking for one.
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Richard Shekari gave feedback to The Closers for “Lolly”:
ok this is good. i was first attracted by the cover but i love the tune better.
extra clean work.
played it and will come for more.
 Jun 18, 2015, 13:10 EDT
The Closers 
Thanks Richard,
If you liked the track, here is a studio version. Both are free downloads:
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Richard Shekari 
i am on it, downloading it straight away. thanks a lot
flag (Jun 18, 2015, 18:44 EDT)

Richard Shekari gave feedback to Via Coma for “Stitches”:
lovely song, cool vibe. makes one calm, wish i could sing with a calm tone like this. i will check more songs from this artist
 Jun 15, 2015, 10:26 EDT

fabulous gave feedback to WalaWalaWala for “Razer”:
I love this song do much nice one bro hood work
 Jun 09, 2015, 01:35 EDT
Thank you. It's a free download, too!
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Rex Yehudi (shoham) gave feedback to Ian Marquis for “One-Way Glass”:
Ominous!!! Very mature beat. Seems like you are really continuing to develop your craft.

Vintage Marquis -- who is this girl on the track?

Big fan of the guitar outro as well.

Did you ever get your stuff out to the college radio station?
 Jun 06, 2015, 11:25 EDT
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Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
It's pretty cool, because this way everyone can make ads, not just 'businesses'. Ads are great, when everyone can make them! And the price is right, too!
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Ian Marquis 
I love that ad credits can be used to buy works AND buy ads - so, the community can operate without cash if that's what people want to do. Or, they can use money. Versatility is a good thing!
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Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
I could not agree more, and some people don't have PayPal, some people don't have cash, but this way anyone with a computer can earn credits and even create them. Three ways -- making new connections by giving feedback on the frontpage (which expands the credit base); having Ads show next to your work (you earn 100% of the credits for that!) And like you said, sales, for which you earn 100% of the transfer, no PayPal fee. Couldn't agree more; diversity is a very good thing!
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Ian Marquis 
I just noticed that the album payment options aren't quite as robust as the track ones (you can't set a "pay your own amount" for the whole set; no credits price or option). Is that a planned feature?
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Rex Yehudi (shoham) gave feedback to Karmawimp for “Deep Breath”:
You guys are getting stronger, especially rhythmically. Very impressive. Also, I notice a lot of new strength in your vocals and songwriting skills, not to mention your production quality. Its like really high quality pop-punk, now!

I think that you could continue to improve how you are incorporating the vocals. It might be my headphones, but the vocals sound too soft for me...

Thank you,
 Mar 09, 2015, 12:02 EDT
Thank you for the feed back! It really means a lot. Since we don't know any drummers at the moment, we have been looking into alternatives. For this song I was able to find an artist who sells albums of drum tracks for people to use in their own music. I have also been really looking at the art of recording, trying to get the most out of my instruments with what I have access to, which isn't very much!
In regards to the softness of the vocals, you are probably correct. I'm still trying to figure out this whole mixing business!
As always, thank you for the support!
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Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
very nice. i think that you guys are well on your way to greatness! are you two still working remotely? thanks -$shoham
flag (Mar 10, 2015, 14:37 EDT)
Yes. I'm still in California, and Roger is still in Arizona. By now, we have definitely gotten a better grasp on how to go about our recording and such. We have a few more songs we are working on at the moment that we are pretty excited about.
flag (Mar 10, 2015, 14:53 EDT)
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
Well, slow but steady as they say. Good work, guys! $Shoham

flag (Mar 10, 2015, 14:57 EDT)

Cool little Indian motif/backwards sounding guitar on this intro here, Ian!

I like the new sound. Very easy to move to. Very catchy, and has a new feeling to it, although it is consistent with your trademark 80' sound that we've all come to know and love.

I am impressed by how far you have come, and am looking forward to more!

Good to hear from you again :)
 Jul 09, 2013, 15:51 EDT
Ian Marquis 
Glad you like it! I've been trying to make my sound even more polished, professional, and integrated. I think this album is going to be a good one for me - one I can get some attention for, if I push it.
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Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
push it good :]
flag (Jul 10, 2013, 06:12 EDT)
... you write some great pop rock tunes ... nice production ...
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tawmy gave feedback to Ian Marquis for “Pretend”:
... great song ... nice vocals and harmonies ...very good production ...
 Feb 28, 2015, 14:26 EST

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