Rex Yehudi (shoham) gave feedback to Richard Shekari for “Pour some wine”:
Good party song.
 Jun 20, 2015, 16:25 EDT

Richard Shekari gave feedback to missy tnk for “U Don't Deserve Me”:
yo missy
i love the song but the title can kill a lover :)
great work by the way, you have a wonderful voice. keep it up.
it will be fair to us if we can have the lyrics too to flow along with you
it is beautifully blended.
 Jun 18, 2015, 19:05 EDT
missy tnk 
U don't want this work
but I want this to work

Said I eat too much
And I talk too fast
that I'm a little brash
oh, and could I be quiet?

U told me that I'm too fat
and that I make you tired
You start complaining about me
What do you want me to change?

I know that I'm not perfect
but you're not worth it
If I make you embarassed
it's time to make this over

I'm not sophisticated
who said I wanna be?
your love is overrated
man, you're under three
You always find something to tease me over it
I know I said I'm in
but tell me again what its

Oh I'm over it
Oh I'm quitting this
Oh I thought I was strong but oh
I'm weakening

Man, you dont require this love I give you over and over
though you are a jerk and a loser
Don't know why I put up with you over the years
You dont deserve me
You dont own me

Oh I'm over it
Oh I'm quitting this
Oh I thought I was strong but oh
I'm weakening

Man, you dont require this love I give you over and over
though you are a jerk and a loser
don't know why I put up with you over the years
You dont deserve me
You dont own me

You dont deserve me
You don't own me
own me

Those r the lyrics😊
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Richard Shekari gave feedback to Arsini for “Ike Ill Mice Elf”:
i think you are great and this track is wonderful.
arsini i love the lyrics but hey, do not kill yaself lol
so the idea of repeating them phrase on and on on the intro is cool, you took me by surprise didn't know it is a rap song and yoyoy
ma homie you got this locked down..shoot! keep it up
 Jun 19, 2015, 02:49 EDT

Vocals sound tight, Richard!

Great message, very good flow and production as well. I enjoyed the Kool and the Gang reference in the middle of the song, too. I'm definitely buying this one.

Thank you,
 Jun 13, 2015, 10:16 EDT
Omitted 4 posts.
Richard Shekari 
Richard Shekari B.Tech in Architecture. it does help me do other things, oh have i told you i have one published book out titled 'the broken wings of forgiveness'
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Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
I saw that online. Do you use your architecture degree still?
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Richard Shekari 
yes i do, i practice once i get any client, few projects on ground but currently work for the federal government as a Search and Rescue Officer with the National Emergency Management Agency (NEMA) Nigeria here in the capital Abuja
flag (Jun 18, 2015, 11:20 EDT)
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
Cool, man. Do you rebuild damaged properties with the agency? Reading your book as we speak (just bought a copy on here!). Very interesting stuff -- is this fiction or non-fiction? -$Shoham
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Rex Yehudi (shoham) gave feedback to EscalJacks for “I'm Zambian”:
Cool tune. I am impressed by your production quality and your lyricism is strong as well.

Very catchy track, $EscalJacks. I think that it can have broad commercial appeal. If you have a PayPal, list it for sale and I'll buy a copy, if not list it for Ad Credits and I'll throw you some AC.

Thank you for sharing.

Where are you from?
 Jun 14, 2015, 11:21 EDT
Thank you very for checking can also check out my other tracks here you can also follow me on Instagram user escaljacks and twitter handle too...and I'm from southern Africa Zambia..
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Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
Would like to go Zambia one day. What is itg like? Keep in touch -SAZ
flag (Jun 17, 2015, 06:38 EDT)
you are welcome...its a friendly country and amazing tourist attraction feel free to google about it.
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Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
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The Closers gave feedback to Richard Shekari for “Frozen tears”:
"Try and smile better days are up ahead" -- very powerful message. It's sad, but it is true -- the poor stay poor, and the rich richer. Stay strong in spirit!

Well done. -$theclosers
 Jun 15, 2015, 10:47 EDT
Richard Shekari 
thank you so much for the support
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The Closers 
it's no problem. thanks for sharing.
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Rex Yehudi (shoham) gave feedback to Richard Shekari for “Celebrate life”:
Another great message. Keep up the positive attitude, Richard. o daraa
 Jun 13, 2015, 21:52 EDT
Richard Shekari 
i can't thank you enough for such words of encouragement. i really appreciate it
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Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
Make use of it, and pass it on! -$Shoham
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Rex Yehudi (shoham) gave feedback to TiKkO for “02) Dope Boy Theme”:
It's been a while man. You got any new tracks? We're still waiting for 'Pink & Green' -s
 Jun 07, 2015, 08:35 EDT

Rex Yehudi (shoham) gave feedback to missy tnk for “U Don't Deserve Me”:
I think it's a good start. You wrote that the track was 'unloveable' -- but it sounds good. First of all, and I mean this 100% seriously, the length is perfect -- 2:42, that's been the magic number for over 100 years, probably a lot longer -- probably has something to do with how much a brain can process -- even classical pieces that are long only stick with one theme for a few minutes at the most.

The productions is well put together and your vocals are nice -- very relaxed.

What are the lyrics?

 Jun 05, 2015, 20:17 EDT
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
Also: One hint. It seems that you didn't set up a PayPal account. You can also accept Ad Credits for downloads. Ad credits can be used for, well ads: or to buy works that are avaialbe for sale through AC. Some of mine are ;) And you earn AC when you give feedback on the 'homepage'. Welcome to FeedForward! -$Shoham
flag (Jun 05, 2015, 20:22 EDT)


First of all very cool cover art!

Well produced track, I think that the flow really works on this one. Vocal harmonies are also quite nice.

Also, cool that you made this track Creative Commons -- very progressive. I appreciate the spirit for sure :)

Thank you very much,
 Jun 04, 2015, 21:47 EDT