Rex Yehudi (shoham) gave feedback to Richard Shekari for “Pour some wine”:
Good party song.
 Jun 20, 2015, 16:25 EDT


Richard Shekari gave feedback to missy tnk for “U Don't Deserve Me”:
yo missy
i love the song but the title can kill a lover :)
great work by the way, you have a wonderful voice. keep it up.
it will be fair to us if we can have the lyrics too to flow along with you
it is beautifully blended.
 Jun 18, 2015, 19:05 EDT
missy tnk 
U don't want this work
but I want this to work

Said I eat too much
And I talk too fast
that I'm a little brash
oh, and could I be quiet?

U told me that I'm too fat
and that I make you tired
You start complaining about me
What do you want me to change?

I know that I'm not perfect
but you're not worth it
If I make you embarassed
it's time to make this over

I'm not sophisticated
who said I wanna be?
your love is overrated
man, you're under three
You always find something to tease me over it
I know I said I'm in
but tell me again what its

Oh I'm over it
Oh I'm quitting this
Oh I thought I was strong but oh
I'm weakening

Man, you dont require this love I give you over and over
though you are a jerk and a loser
Don't know why I put up with you over the years
You dont deserve me
You dont own me

Oh I'm over it
Oh I'm quitting this
Oh I thought I was strong but oh
I'm weakening

Man, you dont require this love I give you over and over
though you are a jerk and a loser
don't know why I put up with you over the years
You dont deserve me
You dont own me

You dont deserve me
You don't own me
own me

Those r the lyrics😊
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Richard Shekari gave feedback to J. Wager for “Nautical March (Fishing)”:
hey wager,
i think this is by far the best i have heard today. great listen here, the song is cool, got me off my feet for real.
keep up the good work, will come for more. loove the cool vibe
do have a great day
 Jun 19, 2015, 02:54 EDT


Vocals sound tight, Richard!

Great message, very good flow and production as well. I enjoyed the Kool and the Gang reference in the middle of the song, too. I'm definitely buying this one.

Thank you,
-$Shoham
 Jun 13, 2015, 10:16 EDT
Omitted 4 posts.
Richard Shekari 
Richard Shekari B.Tech in Architecture. it does help me do other things, oh have i told you i have one published book out titled 'the broken wings of forgiveness' http://www.barnesandnoble.com/w/the-broken-wings-of-forgiveness-richard-shekari/1120386730?ean=9781482802863
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Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
I saw that online. Do you use your architecture degree still?
flag (Jun 18, 2015, 10:09 EDT)
Richard Shekari 
yes i do, i practice once i get any client, few projects on ground but currently work for the federal government as a Search and Rescue Officer with the National Emergency Management Agency (NEMA) Nigeria here in the capital Abuja
flag (Jun 18, 2015, 11:20 EDT)
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
Cool, man. Do you rebuild damaged properties with the agency? Reading your book as we speak (just bought a copy on here!). Very interesting stuff -- is this fiction or non-fiction? -$Shoham
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Rex Yehudi (shoham) gave feedback to Richard Shekari for “Celebrate life”:
Another great message. Keep up the positive attitude, Richard. o daraa
-$shoham
 Jun 13, 2015, 21:52 EDT
Richard Shekari 
i can't thank you enough for such words of encouragement. i really appreciate it
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Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
Make use of it, and pass it on! -$Shoham
flag (Jun 15, 2015, 10:34 EDT)


Rex Yehudi (shoham) gave feedback to missy tnk for “U Don't Deserve Me”:
I think it's a good start. You wrote that the track was 'unloveable' -- but it sounds good. First of all, and I mean this 100% seriously, the length is perfect -- 2:42, that's been the magic number for over 100 years, probably a lot longer -- probably has something to do with how much a brain can process -- even classical pieces that are long only stick with one theme for a few minutes at the most.

The productions is well put together and your vocals are nice -- very relaxed.

What are the lyrics?

Thanks,
-Shoham
 Jun 05, 2015, 20:17 EDT
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
Also: One hint. It seems that you didn't set up a PayPal account. You can also accept Ad Credits for downloads. Ad credits can be used for, well ads: https://www.feed-forward.net/?tab=userpage&subtab=ads or to buy works that are avaialbe for sale through AC. Some of mine are ;) And you earn AC when you give feedback on the 'homepage'. Welcome to FeedForward! -$Shoham
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Rex Yehudi (shoham) gave feedback to fresh boss for “freshboy”:
Hey $freshboy:

It's a cool track! Now, I cannot hear great on these speakers, but I feel as if the bass line could have some more syncopation for this to be a really good club track. That says, its ounds well thought though and the lyrics are, as you have said "simple and easy to sing along to."

o ṣeun,
-$shoham
 May 28, 2015, 14:59 EDT


tawmy gave feedback to Telephantom for “Anything”:
... i love this ... reminds me of my youthful days in the 80s ... music by Ultravox ... vox by OMD... downloaded it at your sc page ...
 Feb 28, 2015, 13:23 EST


Telephantom gave feedback to Telephantom for “Anything”:
Check our music Video for Silence.

http://youtu.be/7re7ft-lSxE
 Feb 07, 2015, 01:16 EST
tawmy 
... i can only find about four of your songs on the interwebs ... i'd love to hear more ... and i may know of a record company / publisher / promoter that would like to hear more ;-) ... do you have an agent / manager ?
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Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
good production value, guys. who produced this video_ HAs a vintage, early 90s vibe. song sounds good too. Thanks, $Shoham
flag (Feb 26, 2015, 09:44 EST)
JZC 
cool! liked the cats and darth vadar! good to hear a unique sound!
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tawmy gave feedback to Telephantom for “Anything”:
... i love your sound ... great layering of musical textures with awesome vocals ... reminds me of The White Space (formerly the 'Lucy Show') ... telephantom is the best thing I've ever heard at ff
 Feb 25, 2015, 23:04 EST
tawmy 
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