I really like the production here. The sounds mesh together very nicely. I think the vocals could stand out a little more.

This is intense, I love the mix of genre's, very nice work

Good production quality, Patrick! I like the little Mr. rogers xylophone thing throughout, especially :D Good syncopation as well! Smooth sounds, I'd like to hear more, and maybe hook up with an MC, because I think that your music would go really well matched up with some lyrics... My two cents...

Could definitely use some vocals, but otherwise an awesome tune. I like the organ part in the middle. B3 4EVER!!!

I like that little 15/16 (or some equivalent fraction) thingy you have going at the beginning. It keeps you from being able to do a straight head-bob at first which made me notice when it went to 4/4 at 1:10ish. Really cool beat manipulation. The synth is really good sounding, especially the bass. I really like your work, please upload more!
-Alex

NICE! So soothing. Just perfect

Very nice sounding.

Good stuff. Piano tone is nice. Is it a 'real' piano, or a synthesizer? Also, I like this cover. Did you paint it?
-Arie

Cool beat. I like this kind of mellow Jazz. Are these instruments live or all or some computer generated, or some combination of the two? Piano solos sound very good, and the drums are nice, especially if they are computer, as it's not that easy to get a nice variety and tone-- I don't think from electronic drums, from what I understand, though I've never programmed them. Cool changes in key as well, though it could have been twice as long at least. My niece and nephew were just getting down :D

I think this is a good start. I'd love to hear more tone and emotion in your vocals, though. Also, you might want to rework your verse melody/chords a bit - I immediately thought of Bad Company's Shooting Star when you started in. Keep it up, man!