shiloh wangsgard gave feedback to Raum for “Silly Dreams (Original)”:
The first thing I want to say is, wow great work! Out of your body of work that I'm familiar with I have to say this is the most well constructed one yet. I think this song is designed for piano. At least it sounds like piano would be great company. Please continue to work this one
 Nov 10, 2019, 19:21 EST


Rex Yehudi (shoham) gave feedback to Raum for “Silly Dreams (Original)”:
Very nice start. I would like to hear a 2nd recording but keep it lofi!

I liked that middle 8 around 2" in!
 Nov 04, 2019, 11:03 EST
Raum 
A second take is needed for sure.

Thank you, I feeling I'm really improving when it comes to my song structure song with my vocals.
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Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
This is one of the best!
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Raum gave feedback to shiloh wangsgard for “Clouded Moon”:
Beautiful photo
 Nov 07, 2019, 08:01 EST
shiloh wangsgard 
Thank you. To be honest though, Colorado does the hard part. I just have to be observant.
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Raum gave feedback to shiloh wangsgard for “Looking up”:
Ah. Human ingenuity and technology is what brings us this.
 Oct 21, 2019, 19:50 EDT


I really like the lyrics and arrangement.
 Oct 21, 2019, 17:19 EDT
Raum 
Thank you Shiloh, I really appriciate that. I've been writing so much lately, I've almost filled up a whole notebook of ideas and songs. I really only record the ones I think are worthy enough.
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Rex Yehudi (shoham) gave feedback to Raum for “We Can Escape Reality”:
Great start, loving the schizo-vox! Dreamlike :)

I'd really like some low-register counterpoint (A bassline...) I also feel like this would be a perfect chance to try out like a medley -- go briskly into a totally different theme for about a minute or two and then back to this main theme,

I'M FEELING IT BABY!!!
 Oct 06, 2019, 11:35 EDT
Raum 
Thank you Shoham.
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Richard Shekari gave feedback to Raum for “"Claim" - Final Version”:
Great piece, Raum.
 Sep 02, 2019, 09:22 EDT


Rex Yehudi (shoham) gave feedback to Raum for “"Claim" - Final Version”:
Noe THIS sounds like a Mccartney song - like from "Ram" PRODUCTION LIKE THIS...
 Aug 30, 2019, 07:51 EDT
Raum 
Sing how that's one of my favorite top 15 albums I am going take that as a major compliment sir. Do you agree on the lead any baseline along with the ending lead during last 3 lines?
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Raum 
It's also related to ram due to the fact that I am doing all the instruments and vocals just like Paul did on not album. Now that you've mentioned it I can for sure hear some ram influence coming out. I'm glad that this piece came together all right.
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Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
you bet your tush.
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Raum gave feedback to Rex Yehudi (shoham) for “Up & Down”:
Been playing this song a lot recently to get smooth at it. Raum is ready to record a version of this fantastic song.
 Aug 30, 2019, 06:56 EDT
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
Very exciting. I didn't understand your questions about, 'claim'... Please expand...
flag (Aug 30, 2019, 09:39 EDT)
Raum 
Oh. Well does the bass line and guitar lesds sound okay? Im coming out of my box when it cones to recordings song and hoing beyond chords.
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Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
It all sounds raw - in a good way. I just didn't want to misinterpret based on a typo. YOU'RE DOING IT!
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Raum 
The bass part could be better if I Spent the day get getting the groove down. I am however proud of the guitar solo along with the base walk that goes with the solo. Also I like how the ending turned out with the high pitched guitar playing high C and F to add alttle extra embellishment. Thank you Shoham.
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Raum gave feedback to Rex Yehudi (shoham) for “This Means War”:
Your wording will always grasp me, the way you rhyme some of the words you do really reminds me of how McCartney would.

The song picks up at 2:00 and starts tension and anticipation. A suggestion of mine would be to take that and someone work it into the song a bit more, since the song already has a tense feeling to it, it seems only natural.

That is just my advice. Sounds great otherwise.
 Aug 29, 2019, 22:24 EDT
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
Maybe I would build in an extended hypertense instrumental? Thank you, amigo! I think this one could be produced in an industrial style as is... That might help too
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