bert has a paper clip collection-is this about b and e?? it's a good song-good singing and interesting and not repeaty-many keys not working on keyboard
 Aug 11, 2019, 21:06 EDT
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
Thank you, what does "many keys not working on keyboard" mean -- computer QWERTY? Also, there are many paperclip collections, and although this is not about Bert and Ernie, it does allude to PLATONIC male-male relationships -- Bob & Peter, John & Paul, and if you like B&E, but that was not as intentional as the other two. Be Well and thank you, Rex
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cute! i just recently saw pictures of fluffy blow-dried(blown-dry?) cows-got any of those pics?
 Aug 11, 2019, 21:23 EDT


: ) classy, Lassie and much more appropriate, mate
 Aug 11, 2019, 20:44 EDT


Gabrielle gave feedback to Marco Alamilla for “A tech”:
I like this one the best of the ones you just posted. Looks like man frozen into blocks of ice.
 Jul 21, 2019, 17:56 EDT
Marco Alamilla 
Thanks
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Gabrielle gave feedback to Richard Shekari for “All the nations”:
An oldie but goodie. Very upbeat, and I like the cover art a lot! When did you start writing songs?
 Jul 21, 2019, 18:04 EDT
Richard Shekari 
hi, Gabrielle.
Thanks a lot for the listen.
It sure is an old song, Evey song I sang and recorded were were written by me. Started music way back 2002 but they were mostly rap songs and you know how dirty it gets Verbally and lyrically with Hip-hop haha.
Been a while, hope you're doing just fine
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Is this a two-man band? I like this one. Very boppy.
 Jul 21, 2019, 18:01 EDT


A lot of vulgarity. Some writers do this for shock value, I guess. Maybe put a cover page with a warning on it at the very least.
 Jul 18, 2019, 20:19 EDT
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
in 1952.
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Gabrielle gave feedback to The Middlemen for “It Brings me Back”:
Nice, mellow song. Vocals sound good but muffled. Is that on purpose?
 Jul 03, 2019, 18:58 EDT
The Middlemen 
This was from the strokes era - when producing songs that sounded like garage made on purpose was the rage! Also we have starstruck and no reply in that vain. Thank you.
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Is this about Jesus? Left the market fleeced-cause he's the lamb . .. the Lamb of God.
 Jul 03, 2019, 19:02 EDT
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
Are all my newer songs???!!! 0.o -- "The bread is gone, the bottle's dry"...? It's mostly about guys like 'Indiana Jones Hat' etc. in that age group and also people who do stuff to get it off their checklist or "Bucketlist" -- other titles considered were "Bucketlist Berry" and "Todo List Tim"
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I like the guest vocals. What is the significance of "Please,open the gate?"

Who's Dapper Dan? Is this a Trump song or what?
 Jun 19, 2019, 19:03 EDT
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
This song is about a pedophile. Dapper Dan is a Pittsburgh thing.
flag (Jun 20, 2019, 07:11 EDT)