Gabrielle gave feedback to Richard Shekari for “(deleted)”:
I can't keep up! I'm reading Anna the Human right now. One day I'll get to all of them . . .
 Feb 06, 2017, 20:03 EST
Richard Shekari 
Oh my, $Gabrieller I am literally on my knees :D I'm not intentionally trying to torture you :) I just can't help it too, gotta keep writing. I actually made it my new year resolution not to write any story this year but have written three aleady lol so I spoke to a certain fellow it and he said, "Get married, you won't even have time to breathe!" hah I still don't know what it means. happy new year, i hope you're doing just fine. I'm glad to know you're up on Anna the Human. I am more than honoured
flag (Feb 07, 2017, 01:12 EST)


shoham gave feedback to Richard Shekari for “(deleted)”:
I thought I told you that we don't stop
I thought I told you that we don't stop..
 Feb 05, 2017, 08:44 EST
Richard Shekari 
(Turn Table scratches)
Baaad boy...oh bad boy....
lol I just can't help me, man.
Hope you're cool, i will try and keep it to two titles a month
flag (Feb 05, 2017, 10:07 EST)
shoham 
JAJAJAJA! Or do it in serial form so that I can digest the digest!! SAZ
flag (Feb 05, 2017, 13:06 EST)


Man, some bad ass narrator you are, Sho!
This is good. I love the strong technical words you put up;
-autonecrotardation
- cryogenic freezing
-rigeur mortis

Teach me your technique, Master.
I will be Jacky Chan and you will be the Drunken master.
Keep it up, man. See, you've got a lot to share with the world after all.
scifi!
 Jan 11, 2017, 04:28 EST
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Richard Shekari 
The thing is your technique is fresh, unique and I've got to admit, superb. I was expecting the usual sh*t and then you nuked me off my damn feet. Keep it up, and please tell me you are still writing and not that you just treated that story like one of those 'usual' thing and act like it's not worth your precious time. I just finished one, The Unifier. Still going through it though, once done I'd put it up
flag (Jan 18, 2017, 03:57 EST)
shoham 
Unifier. Sounds intense!!! The problem for me is I hardly have the discipline to focus in on reading a story let alone writing one. ADHD -- my KRYPTONITE!
flag (Jan 18, 2017, 11:13 EST)
Richard Shekari 
I hate reading. Trully. But when the story comes i won't find peace until it's puked out lol. I guess that means you refused to finish your sci-fi
flag (Jan 18, 2017, 23:29 EST)
shoham 
let's just call it a.. work in progress... -- aren't we all??!!

PS: Part II coming soon.....
flag (Jan 19, 2017, 06:49 EST)


tawmy gave feedback to shoham for “Beatrix Little (A Serial -- Part 1)”:
... Very Interesting Shoham ... so what Friedrich Nietzsche said is true !

I knew it !
 Jan 15, 2017, 18:50 EST
shoham 
YOU WERE RIGHT the whole time!!! Hey, what do you think of this track? I mean the production aside? https://www.feed-forward.net/w.6673_Dont_Piss_On_My_Tombstone

Thanks for reading.
flag (Jan 16, 2017, 09:25 EST)


What's a serial? Why are they typing? That seems outdated . . . or has it been 1,287 years and now it's 1950 or something? Autonecrotardation????

automatic death slowing . . .?
 Jan 11, 2017, 20:19 EST
shoham 
serial is something that's in a series. Typing is like texting. ANT is what you think it is.... More to come??!!??
flag (Jan 12, 2017, 12:23 EST)


wow, this is awesome. Let me see how your own mind looks like hehe.
Reading it now
 Jan 11, 2017, 04:20 EST


shoham gave feedback to Richard Shekari for “The War of Wars”:
You are inspiring me, man. I just got started w/this puppy but I had dreams last night about writing a Shekari style novella. Stay tuned for that and review of War of Wars! Shoham
 Jan 09, 2017, 09:53 EST
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Richard Shekari 
This is awesome, best finish this cause you've already made me taste its sweet exotic nectar.
flag (Jan 09, 2017, 10:31 EST)
Richard Shekari 
If you did that in just five minutes then I am already scared, that's like a page work, man. Imagine what you would achieve in a day or a week, or say if you decide to take a month's project. And I love the concept. Looks fresh, and juicy
flag (Jan 09, 2017, 11:05 EST)
shoham 
idupe! I have no discipline! Also why I struggle with production!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
flag (Jan 09, 2017, 11:24 EST)
shoham 
We've only just begun. 100% inspired by one Rex Razer: https://www.feed-forward.net/w.6689_Beatrix_Little_A_Serial_--_Part_1
flag (Jan 09, 2017, 23:22 EST)


Gabrielle gave feedback to shoham for “We're The Kings in The North!”:
Sounds like Dave Crawley-http://pittsburgh.cbslocal.com/personality/dave-crawley/ -the rhyming guy from the local news. I heard he might be retiring. . .

Why is Bell capitalized?

I like the references to Edgar Allen Poe-because of the Ravens and Baltimore, right?
 Dec 27, 2016, 09:08 EST
shoham 
LeVeon Bell... It is b/c of EA POE and the Baltimore Football Club's Nickname. Correct!
flag (Dec 27, 2016, 13:16 EST)


shoham gave feedback to Richard Shekari for “(deleted)”:
Great stuff! I wish I could read faster/had a better attention span! But I believe it is your best yet. Way to go, chum :)
 Dec 22, 2016, 18:08 EST
Richard Shekari 
Thanks mate. If don't get this mind busy, the devil will turn it into his playground. Lol thanks a lot, how is prep for Christmas over there. Funny thing is, people like me will be at work that day. #Rescue team
flag (Dec 23, 2016, 07:19 EST)
shoham 
True. Prep is going good -- I'm not religious, so it will be stress free hopefully! Maybe one of these days you'll get some time off!
flag (Dec 23, 2016, 09:34 EST)
Richard Shekari 
"Not religious!" aah we all use that line, I think my sisters and mom would be shock me leaving for work tomorrow while they toast to the season. Used to love it, age took it away.
No new stuff from you, haven't you recorded anything yet?
flag (Dec 24, 2016, 08:06 EST)
shoham 
Got something new on the way, Sho
flag (Dec 24, 2016, 14:51 EST)
shoham 
flag (Dec 24, 2016, 16:41 EST)


shoham gave feedback to Richard Shekari for “(deleted)”:
Does this man ever sleep? Just getting started on this one, but I can say that the first paragraph alone is VERY well written -- very nice use of descriptive language.
 Dec 21, 2016, 08:43 EST

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