Is it about a dog?! ;)
 Aug 31, 2019, 18:49 EDT
shiloh wangsgard 
Haha... In a way I guess. Its about a guy who is so lost he is erasing all the people in his life that love him, because he is really happy being lost and rejected.
flag (Aug 31, 2019, 19:24 EDT)
shiloh wangsgard 
I really stuggle with how to arrange it so it is fluid. I feel like it looses direction or maybe no clear direction is present... I don't really know if it makes sense.
flag (Aug 31, 2019, 19:31 EDT)
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
interesting. i thought maybe the mess on the floor was something else!
flag (Aug 31, 2019, 20:29 EDT)
shiloh wangsgard 
Haha
flag (Aug 31, 2019, 20:49 EDT)
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
"One writes out of one thing only - one's own experience. Everything depends on how relentlessly one forces from this experience the last drop, sweet or bitter, it can possibly give. This is the only real concern of the artist, to recreate out of the disorder of life that order which is art." - James Baldwin
flag (Sep 01, 2019, 07:43 EDT)


"The hope you never bleed from" powerful line!
 Aug 31, 2019, 09:03 EDT
shiloh wangsgard 
I like that too. Thank you!
flag (Aug 31, 2019, 18:05 EDT)


: ) classy, Lassie and much more appropriate, mate
 Aug 11, 2019, 20:44 EDT


A lot of vulgarity. Some writers do this for shock value, I guess. Maybe put a cover page with a warning on it at the very least.
 Jul 18, 2019, 20:19 EDT
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
in 1952.
flag (Jul 18, 2019, 20:38 EDT)


Gabrielle gave feedback to Richard Shekari for “(deleted)”:
I can't keep up! I'm reading Anna the Human right now. One day I'll get to all of them . . .
 Feb 06, 2017, 20:03 EST
Richard Shekari 
Oh my, $Gabrieller I am literally on my knees :D I'm not intentionally trying to torture you :) I just can't help it too, gotta keep writing. I actually made it my new year resolution not to write any story this year but have written three aleady lol so I spoke to a certain fellow it and he said, "Get married, you won't even have time to breathe!" hah I still don't know what it means. happy new year, i hope you're doing just fine. I'm glad to know you're up on Anna the Human. I am more than honoured
flag (Feb 07, 2017, 01:12 EST)


Rex Yehudi (shoham) gave feedback to Richard Shekari for “(deleted)”:
I thought I told you that we don't stop
I thought I told you that we don't stop..
 Feb 05, 2017, 08:44 EST
Richard Shekari 
(Turn Table scratches)
Baaad boy...oh bad boy....
lol I just can't help me, man.
Hope you're cool, i will try and keep it to two titles a month
flag (Feb 05, 2017, 10:07 EST)
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
JAJAJAJA! Or do it in serial form so that I can digest the digest!! SAZ
flag (Feb 05, 2017, 13:06 EST)


Man, some bad ass narrator you are, Sho!
This is good. I love the strong technical words you put up;
-autonecrotardation
- cryogenic freezing
-rigeur mortis

Teach me your technique, Master.
I will be Jacky Chan and you will be the Drunken master.
Keep it up, man. See, you've got a lot to share with the world after all.
scifi!
 Jan 11, 2017, 04:28 EST
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Richard Shekari 
The thing is your technique is fresh, unique and I've got to admit, superb. I was expecting the usual sh*t and then you nuked me off my damn feet. Keep it up, and please tell me you are still writing and not that you just treated that story like one of those 'usual' thing and act like it's not worth your precious time. I just finished one, The Unifier. Still going through it though, once done I'd put it up
flag (Jan 18, 2017, 03:57 EST)
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
Unifier. Sounds intense!!! The problem for me is I hardly have the discipline to focus in on reading a story let alone writing one. ADHD -- my KRYPTONITE!
flag (Jan 18, 2017, 11:13 EST)
Richard Shekari 
I hate reading. Trully. But when the story comes i won't find peace until it's puked out lol. I guess that means you refused to finish your sci-fi
flag (Jan 18, 2017, 23:29 EST)
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
let's just call it a.. work in progress... -- aren't we all??!!

PS: Part II coming soon.....
flag (Jan 19, 2017, 06:49 EST)


... Very Interesting Shoham ... so what Friedrich Nietzsche said is true !

I knew it !
 Jan 15, 2017, 18:50 EST
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
YOU WERE RIGHT the whole time!!! Hey, what do you think of this track? I mean the production aside? https://www.feed-forward.net/w.6673_Dont_Piss_On_My_Tombstone

Thanks for reading.
flag (Jan 16, 2017, 09:25 EST)


What's a serial? Why are they typing? That seems outdated . . . or has it been 1,287 years and now it's 1950 or something? Autonecrotardation????

automatic death slowing . . .?
 Jan 11, 2017, 20:19 EST
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
serial is something that's in a series. Typing is like texting. ANT is what you think it is.... More to come??!!??
flag (Jan 12, 2017, 12:23 EST)


wow, this is awesome. Let me see how your own mind looks like hehe.
Reading it now
 Jan 11, 2017, 04:20 EST

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