Haha... In a way I guess. Its about a guy who is so lost he is erasing all the people in his life that love him, because he is really happy being lost and rejected.

flag (Aug 31, 2019, 19:24 EDT)

I really stuggle with how to arrange it so it is fluid. I feel like it looses direction or maybe no clear direction is present... I don't really know if it makes sense.

flag (Aug 31, 2019, 19:31 EDT)

interesting. i thought maybe the mess on the floor was something else!

flag (Aug 31, 2019, 20:29 EDT)

Haha

flag (Aug 31, 2019, 20:49 EDT)

"One writes out of one thing only - one's own experience. Everything depends on how relentlessly one forces from this experience the last drop, sweet or bitter, it can possibly give. This is the only real concern of the artist, to recreate out of the disorder of life that order which is art." - James Baldwin

flag (Sep 01, 2019, 07:43 EDT)

I like that too. Thank you!

flag (Aug 31, 2019, 18:05 EDT)

in 1952.

flag (Jul 18, 2019, 20:38 EDT)

Oh my, $Gabrieller I am literally on my knees :D I'm not intentionally trying to torture you :) I just can't help it too, gotta keep writing. I actually made it my new year resolution not to write any story this year but have written three aleady lol so I spoke to a certain fellow it and he said, "Get married, you won't even have time to breathe!" hah I still don't know what it means. happy new year, i hope you're doing just fine. I'm glad to know you're up on Anna the Human. I am more than honoured

flag (Feb 07, 2017, 01:12 EST)

(Turn Table scratches)
Baaad boy...oh bad boy....
lol I just can't help me, man.
Hope you're cool, i will try and keep it to two titles a month

flag (Feb 05, 2017, 10:07 EST)

JAJAJAJA! Or do it in serial form so that I can digest the digest!! SAZ

flag (Feb 05, 2017, 13:06 EST)

The thing is your technique is fresh, unique and I've got to admit, superb. I was expecting the usual sh*t and then you nuked me off my damn feet. Keep it up, and please tell me you are still writing and not that you just treated that story like one of those 'usual' thing and act like it's not worth your precious time. I just finished one, The Unifier. Still going through it though, once done I'd put it up

flag (Jan 18, 2017, 03:57 EST)

Unifier. Sounds intense!!! The problem for me is I hardly have the discipline to focus in on reading a story let alone writing one. ADHD -- my KRYPTONITE!

flag (Jan 18, 2017, 11:13 EST)

I hate reading. Trully. But when the story comes i won't find peace until it's puked out lol. I guess that means you refused to finish your sci-fi

flag (Jan 18, 2017, 23:29 EST)

let's just call it a.. work in progress... -- aren't we all??!!

PS: Part II coming soon.....

flag (Jan 19, 2017, 06:49 EST)

YOU WERE RIGHT the whole time!!! Hey, what do you think of this track? I mean the production aside? https://www.feed-forward.net/w.6673_Dont_Piss_On_My_Tombstone

Thanks for reading.

flag (Jan 16, 2017, 09:25 EST)

serial is something that's in a series. Typing is like texting. ANT is what you think it is.... More to come??!!??

flag (Jan 12, 2017, 12:23 EST)