Wendy gave feedback to Gareth Wiecko for “The Storm”:
Was mesmerised in Bourke Street, today.
Such a hauntingly beautiful composition.
 Apr 22, 2019, 02:34 EDT


Loki gave feedback to Kyle (Raum) Cole for “Better Man Than Me”:
Sounds great man ✌️
 Apr 21, 2019, 12:40 EDT


What does it mean? what's BLUEems?

The "goons" lyrics are not in the actual song, but I think they should be.
 Apr 16, 2019, 18:14 EDT
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
They were in the rough draft which is a hidden bonis track. Always tough to know what to leave on the cutting room floor. What line would you erase then??m. Thanks.
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Gabrielle 
well "Incubated by collective cosmic wombs" is creepy .. .
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Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
Isn't it romantic?
flag (Apr 19, 2019, 14:04 EDT)


Gabrielle gave feedback to Kyle (Raum) Cole for “Better Man Than Me”:
I really like the lyrics-not too simple, not too complex. Guitar sounds great!
 Mar 27, 2019, 13:57 EDT
Kyle (Raum) Cole 
Thank you very much! These lyrics really came from an odd place in my head, but authentic. Been really working on my rythem work since that’s what I love playing.
flag (Mar 31, 2019, 13:17 EDT)


Needs some call and response in the background. Chord changes remind me of "Show me the way", Peter Frampton. A wahwah electric guitar, too?
 Mar 29, 2019, 16:16 EDT
Kyle (Raum) Cole 
Oooo that’s good advice. I like that. I’ve been meaning to pick up some pedals too.
flag (Mar 31, 2019, 13:10 EDT)


Did you re-record this (a word?)

It sounds much clearer and stronger guitar. Could use some whistles.
 Mar 27, 2019, 14:04 EDT
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
1st draft... Whistles like the instrument???
flag (Mar 27, 2019, 16:21 EDT)
Gabrielle 
either instrument or "like real"
flag (Mar 29, 2019, 13:34 EDT)
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
I will have to give it the olde college try...
flag (Mar 29, 2019, 20:55 EDT)


I like the cover art. Did you make this? What's are the symbols around the edge?
I wouldn't normally like this kind of music, but it really stays interesting and doesn't repeat too much like I would maybe incorrectly? expect it to.
 Mar 27, 2019, 14:22 EDT


This song is really speaking to me man....
 Mar 26, 2019, 14:08 EDT
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
Cover that mother, man! COVER THAT MOOOOoooooooother!!!!
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Double Track MAGIC!!! This has got to be a lost John Lennon cut from '74 sessions or something!!!
 Mar 23, 2019, 15:46 EDT
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Kyle (Raum) Cole 
Wow. If Shoham approves this much I know it must be something!
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Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
Inspired a little bit of studio magic. For me at least, very early draft: https://www.feed-forward.net/w.7206_She_bLUEms (for your ears only ;)
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Kyle (Raum) Cole 
You have a great flow. That’s the words I have to describe why I feel so connected to you through your music. We are so on the same wavelength.
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Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
Thanks again man! Not sure I mentioned this, but I have to get my Skype game up to snuff before we talk. Maybe without volume, just text sometime before that.
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Oh wow Shoham, your vocals have gotten a ton better as well! I’m really digging the vocal structure along with the alternative strumming pattern. My only advice would be to come up with an ending point, which I may try and do. Mind sharing the chords? I can give you chords to mine and we can cover each other!

Hell Shoham, we just need to meet up in real life and form a band. I’m serious.
 Mar 24, 2019, 17:15 EDT
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
I did some double tracking in honor of your new tune! What do you mean by ending point? Like don't fade out? It's D-A, D-A-Bm-E for the verses. G-A-D for the chorus (I think!) the lyrics are in the notes, the recording is super 1st draft (like most of my recent ones...)
flag (Mar 24, 2019, 18:21 EDT)
Kyle (Raum) Cole 
I gotcha. I’ll write up my chords in just a bit. And yeah I could see an alternate end other than fade.
flag (Mar 24, 2019, 19:43 EDT)