Airy stuff. I like it, Chris!
I feel as if the composition and performance is very solid. I like the direction you took it around 1:45 -- very true to what I think the concept is based on the tags and title. Cool use of the chorus effect on this track. I like the little drum rolls as well.
I feel as if you could add a bit more texture starting somewhere around 3:15 or so, keep building it up more until the change at 3:31.
I also dig the tension that you build here down the stretch and the finale. I like where this is going, man, keep going!