Is this puppy an original? Sweet tune either way. Nice guitar work. Pump up the volume on the vocals, please sir.

Maybe your most mature work ever? If this is the future of rock and roll --- sign me UP! After last chord maybe give it a bum-bum-bum-bum baaah bass-line...

$Shoham
 Jul 01, 2019, 07:54 CDT
Raum 
I always absolutely looking forward to your feedback! Yes, I have been gaining maturity in my work. Do you think the fills work?
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Raum 
After listening to the both several times, the accidental artifact give the recording a certain feel I can’t put my fingers on, but it works. I really like how that accident made this sound because it gives it that feeling of being more “full”. Would you agree?
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Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
Generally I do. What accident?
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Raum 
I recorded the guitar while singing on one track. During one of my vocal overdub process I mistakenly did not have headphones plugged in. So the monitor was coming out of speakers which in turn bled the sound of that track bleed into my microphone which I was also using to do my overdubs.
This is an artifact effect that most bands in the 60s and 70s had in their recordings, which is said to add a needed “sloppyness” and “sound bleed wall” effect that made recordings of those times different than the perfect recordings of the present.
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Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
NICE! Did not know of this Crickets, sans Buddy Holly tune. Yeah, it's such a balance between no-fi, lo-fi, and on the other end just the bonkersness off overproduced stuff. Even when I am trying my best to get good recordings and I have in the past, (not right now...) it is such a crap shoot for me, which is why in my frustration I have been doing these no-fis for a few years now. KEEP EXPERIMENTING!!!!
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Loki gave feedback to Raum for “Better Man Than Me”:
Sounds great man ✌️
 Apr 21, 2019, 11:40 CDT
Raum 
Really appreciate that!
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I can't believe I had never heard this song before! It's a nice treatment, especially in the vocals. Definitely am happy with your approach to production these days 😂
 May 22, 2019, 06:30 CDT
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
Working on a musical response to this, in the nicetime I thought you might enjoy this newy: https://www.feed-forward.net/w.7228_Checklist_Charlies_Last_Hurrah
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Anthony gave feedback to Raum for “Nowhere man Acoustic cover”:
Good job, buddy.

-Anthony
 Apr 12, 2013, 12:50 CDT
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
The kid's a natural. His originals are even better!!!! Example: http://www.feed-forward.net/w.2253_Ineffable_ You're welcome -Shoham
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Raum 
I really appreciate you saying that, Shoham. <3
Sometimes I doubt myself, but it's friends like you that keep me looking the right way.
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Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
self doubt is the bedrock of creativity, confidence is the sling.
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Raum gave feedback to Raum for “This Magic Moment”:
This is for sure one I need to take another shot at it. I wonder what a 9 year difference would sound like?
 May 19, 2019, 02:22 CDT


Raum gave feedback to Print(the)Seas for “If I Could Draw A Map”:
That strumming is out of this world.
Those vocals are fantastic.
 May 19, 2019, 02:04 CDT


Raum gave feedback to Raum for “Red Rubber Ball”:
Wow, I think this is when I started realizing how to properly sing/harmonize. I love listening back to my old stuff to compare to where I am now.
 May 19, 2019, 02:02 CDT


Raum gave feedback to Raum for “When Did You Leave Heaven? (Rough Demo)”:
I really love this song.

I will probably record a high quality proper recording very soon after hearing this.
 May 19, 2019, 02:00 CDT


Rex Yehudi (shoham) gave feedback to Raum for “Runaway Cover”:
I was hoping that that was what “Runaway Cover” meant.

I feel like the strum need more pop.
shoham
 Jan 19, 2016, 08:43 CST
Raum 
Yeah the strum needed to be more aggressive and
"poppy". Also it seems back then I was afraid to reach certain keys in voice. Something I am much better at now.
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WalaWalaWala gave feedback to Raum for “Go to Pieces”:
Nice rendition :D Love the whistlin' as always!
-Shoham

PS: It was Del Shannon:

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/I_Go_to_Pieces

P&G had "A World Without Love" by Pablo McCartney:

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/A_World_Without_Love
 Dec 01, 2011, 09:25 CST
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Raum 
One of my hobbies is just to learn songs, so I know quite a bit of covers.
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WalaWalaWala 
Nice. That is a great way to get better for sure. How long have you been playing for now, anyway?
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Raum 
I've been teaching myself for about 3 years now.
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Raum 
16 years now. Ha ha!
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