I like the unison vocals. Has a late 50s early 60s feel.

I think you should emphasize the minor chords a little more by changing the strum pattern when you change chords.

Then, I would extend those better man call and response lines in the outro, like a cannon or a round:

https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Round_(music)
 Jan 16, 2019, 10:52 EST
Omitted 4 posts.
Kyle (Raum) Cole 
I love you Shoham.
flag (Jan 18, 2019, 02:42 EST)
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
I LOVE YOU MAN!
flag (Jan 18, 2019, 12:58 EST)
Kyle (Raum) Cole 
Take 10 will be posted tonight. I took some of your advice and added another verse.
flag (Jan 24, 2019, 14:54 EST)
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
Righteous brother!
flag (Jan 24, 2019, 16:52 EST)


Kyle (Raum) Cole gave feedback to Kyle (Raum) Cole for “Better Man Demo”:
Also started a Beatle's reivew channel.

https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC3HIwVT5z1TOavRVccV8elQ/
 Jan 15, 2019, 22:25 EST


Benji Fitten gave feedback to The Closers for “Lolly”:
I enjoyed the intro. The changes in rhythm and riffs keep this really interesting around the 1' mark. especially enjoyed the 2' mark with the aux vocals doing the BAs.
 Feb 22, 2017, 18:23 EST
The Closers 
Thank you benji. This is my favorite version of the track because of the harmonies. There is a more 'polished' version, if you are interested and it's a free download too: https://www.feed-forward.net/w.1004_Lolly_&market
flag (Feb 22, 2017, 19:32 EST)


Rex Yehudi (shoham) gave feedback to Bojko for “At least for one week”:
I don't think I ever noticed this track before. Is that rain in the background? I like the ambient feel of the sound effects. Really accompanies the core track appropriately. Lots of raw emotion on this track. What are the lyrics exactly?
 Dec 19, 2016, 11:02 EST


Aliyu bin yahaya gave feedback to The Closers for “Lolly”:
islamic education awareness and mobilisation is the path we shall take never the less
 Jun 19, 2016, 08:15 EDT
The Closers 
right on brother, but through SPAM???
flag (Jun 19, 2016, 10:22 EDT)
FeedForward 
consider communicating your message in a manner relevant to the work you are critiquing. Thank you, -Staff
flag (Jul 01, 2016, 11:55 EDT)


heavysounds gave feedback to The Middlemen for “Waiting for the Sun”:
I love reggae song. Any reggae song it's is an inspirational song. It signifies something very special. Good work.
 May 05, 2016, 02:52 EDT
The Middlemen 
how I wish i could take credit for this track, but it was our lead guitar player who wrote it -- a fan favorite for sure! thanks a lot for the love, $heavysounds!
flag (May 05, 2016, 13:39 EDT)


heavysounds gave feedback to Bojko for “Everythings fine everything good”:
What's up guy. Mean, you full for this song. You have a great voice. I love punk rock.
 Apr 18, 2016, 10:20 EDT


heavysounds gave feedback to The Closers for “Lolly”:
I like te art work of this song. It really speaks a lot about it. The mixing is very clean, not rough and the rhythm of it is classy. I enjoy listening to it.
 Feb 21, 2016, 00:20 EST
The Closers 
heavysounds, it's nice to know that someone is getting value from this song, still! We wrote and recorded it about 10 years ago -- the pciture is from a movie called Lolita: https://www.google.com/url?sa=t&rct=j&q=&esrc=s&source=web&cd=1&cad=rja&uact=8&ved=0ahUKEwj458Wq6YnLAhUCQT4KHek3AOsQFggdMAA&url=https%3A%2F%2Fen.wikipedia.org%2Fwiki%2FLolita_(1962_film)&usg=AFQjCNFfYT2b6N4itOoeoSqFhtYm7xybsw
flag (Feb 21, 2016, 16:42 EST)


Rex Yehudi (shoham) gave feedback to Reich for “5U”:
again, enjoying the novel syncopation you've got going on here. do you plan to build on this track? new cover art is cool too. -s
 Dec 21, 2015, 17:26 EST


Rex Yehudi (shoham) gave feedback to vishal jaiswal for “vishal jais”:
Good beat, vishal. Actually I would consider this techno or dance, instead of Folk-Rock. You might want to reconsider the tag?

Cool stuff, your from Pakistan, I take it?

Thanks for sharing,
-Sho
 Sep 21, 2015, 07:21 EDT