Loki gave feedback to Kyle (Raum) Cole for “Better Man Than Me”:
Sounds great man ✌️
 Apr 21, 2019, 12:40 EDT

Gabrielle gave feedback to Kyle (Raum) Cole for “Better Man Than Me”:
I really like the lyrics-not too simple, not too complex. Guitar sounds great!
 Mar 27, 2019, 13:57 EDT
Kyle (Raum) Cole 
Thank you very much! These lyrics really came from an odd place in my head, but authentic. Been really working on my rythem work since that’s what I love playing.
flag (Mar 31, 2019, 13:17 EDT)

Needs some call and response in the background. Chord changes remind me of "Show me the way", Peter Frampton. A wahwah electric guitar, too?
 Mar 29, 2019, 16:16 EDT
Kyle (Raum) Cole 
Oooo that’s good advice. I like that. I’ve been meaning to pick up some pedals too.
flag (Mar 31, 2019, 13:10 EDT)

Double Track MAGIC!!! This has got to be a lost John Lennon cut from '74 sessions or something!!!
 Mar 23, 2019, 15:46 EDT
Omitted 2 posts.
Kyle (Raum) Cole 
Wow. If Shoham approves this much I know it must be something!
flag (Mar 24, 2019, 13:48 EDT)
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
Inspired a little bit of studio magic. For me at least, very early draft: https://www.feed-forward.net/w.7206_She_bLUEms (for your ears only ;)
flag (Mar 24, 2019, 15:03 EDT)
Kyle (Raum) Cole 
You have a great flow. That’s the words I have to describe why I feel so connected to you through your music. We are so on the same wavelength.
flag (Mar 24, 2019, 20:54 EDT)
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
Thanks again man! Not sure I mentioned this, but I have to get my Skype game up to snuff before we talk. Maybe without volume, just text sometime before that.
flag (Mar 25, 2019, 18:36 EDT)

Is this Lou Reed?!? lo-fi-finesse...
 Jan 29, 2019, 09:27 EST
Kyle (Raum) Cole 
No sir, this is an original song of mine.
A lot of my recordings remain lo-fi but once in a blue moon I will make a proper recording.
flag (Feb 24, 2019, 12:39 EST)
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
Yeah. I just meant because of the style, and execution. Looking good soldier!
flag (Feb 24, 2019, 18:08 EST)
Kyle (Raum) Cole 
Thank you very much sir! This song really refkects on a dark time in my life. Tried to capture that emotion.
flag (Mar 23, 2019, 13:56 EDT)

I like the unison vocals. Has a late 50s early 60s feel.

I think you should emphasize the minor chords a little more by changing the strum pattern when you change chords.

Then, I would extend those better man call and response lines in the outro, like a cannon or a round:

 Jan 16, 2019, 10:52 EST
Omitted 4 posts.
Kyle (Raum) Cole 
I love you Shoham.
flag (Jan 18, 2019, 02:42 EST)
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
flag (Jan 18, 2019, 12:58 EST)
Kyle (Raum) Cole 
Take 10 will be posted tonight. I took some of your advice and added another verse.
flag (Jan 24, 2019, 14:54 EST)
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
Righteous brother!
flag (Jan 24, 2019, 16:52 EST)

Kyle (Raum) Cole gave feedback to Kyle (Raum) Cole for “Better Man Demo”:
Also started a Beatle's reivew channel.

 Jan 15, 2019, 22:25 EST

I think the drums sound decent. Always a tough decision between being polished and being raw...
 Jan 06, 2019, 11:04 EST
Kyle (Raum) Cole 
Yeah that’s my dilemma right now. I kind of want to start working more on production quality.
flag (Jan 06, 2019, 12:01 EST)
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
you and me both. It is 10% laziness, 90% anxiety, on my end, but the two are related. I have some good experiecnes taking production seriously and some bad ones - you can push to hard and end up with something just as bad as a half baked product, ya know?! I'm going to try to do at least 1 good one this year -- like a 20 hour track type of thing. See if it is worth it and go from there... Keep on pushing! Shoham
flag (Jan 06, 2019, 13:48 EST)

I love this space age theremin sound staring at 1:30 or so. Only needs a killer bassline and this will be a sensation 4 sure!
 Jan 04, 2019, 10:04 EST
Kyle (Raum) Cole 
Yeah I wanted baseline too but was getting late. Need to get a new cord for pro mic and then I got a few projects I will be working on. Going to be recording my songs I have written down and also start recording reviews for anything Beatles on YouTube.

Do the drums sound too off or anything Shoham? I’m not a drummer.
flag (Jan 04, 2019, 12:59 EST)

Kode of Bliss gave feedback to Print(the)Seas for “Chalk”:
Very smooth a relaxing track. Vocals are top notch. everything seem to gel well IMO. Definitely has a folk feel to the track.
 Jul 13, 2018, 20:06 EDT

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