Rex Yehudi (shoham) gave feedback to Raum for “We Can Escape Reality”:
Great start, loving the schizo-vox! Dreamlike :)

I'd really like some low-register counterpoint (A bassline...) I also feel like this would be a perfect chance to try out like a medley -- go briskly into a totally different theme for about a minute or two and then back to this main theme,

I'M FEELING IT BABY!!!
 Oct 06, 2019, 11:35 EDT
Raum 
Thank you Shoham.
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Richard Shekari gave feedback to Raum for “"Claim" - Final Version”:
Great piece, Raum.
 Sep 02, 2019, 09:22 EDT


Rex Yehudi (shoham) gave feedback to Raum for “"Claim" - Final Version”:
Noe THIS sounds like a Mccartney song - like from "Ram" PRODUCTION LIKE THIS...
 Aug 30, 2019, 07:51 EDT
Raum 
Sing how that's one of my favorite top 15 albums I am going take that as a major compliment sir. Do you agree on the lead any baseline along with the ending lead during last 3 lines?
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Raum 
It's also related to ram due to the fact that I am doing all the instruments and vocals just like Paul did on not album. Now that you've mentioned it I can for sure hear some ram influence coming out. I'm glad that this piece came together all right.
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Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
you bet your tush.
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I can't get over your production value on this one! Sounds like Tom Petty + Guns 'n' Roses = Petty Roses?

Also, send me the lyrics for "Claim", please when you get a minute. Thank you,
Shoham

PS: Is that a new guitar? Smooth sound...
 Aug 25, 2019, 22:40 EDT
Raum 
No new guitar. Its the Taylor 100 series i acquired about a yesr ago. She spoils me for sure. Going to restring hopfully today. Want lighter gauge strings so i can bend/bar easier and for a longer amount of time without my hand getting tired from the pressure.

Was actually thinking about stringing electric strings to her because a long time buddy i play with a lot does it and it really works out in many different ways.
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Around 58" maybe add a woman's voice -- if you can find one... Even if just for the up and down parts from 58" on... Then from 1:56 on, add a clap track. Just some thought/notes...
 Aug 26, 2019, 08:29 EDT
Raum 
I csn def getvm down with addingba clap track. Would fit the song well. Appru iste the sdvice as always, i e been listening and puttimg forth effort to work on the things youve suggeted. Just finished "Claim" last night. Added a lead as well as a bass line.
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shiloh wangsgard gave feedback to Raum for “"Claim" - Final Version”:
The first thing I noticed is how much better it sounds now that you have it filled out.
The lyrics are so thought provoking in a way that I have not found often .
New and fresh is always great
Your softer background voice might be a bit too soft...as a thought.
Overall, great job
 Aug 29, 2019, 22:50 EDT
Raum 
Appreciate the compliment on the sound. Getting levels and such is so difficult even after all these years of recording.

I wanted to make a song that sounds catchy but doesn't resonate the way it should until you actually listen and take in consideration of the lyrics. I'm trying to get more "out there" with my writing.

What are you thoughts on the solo, bass line, and the added guitar lead at the very end?
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shiloh wangsgard gave feedback to Raum for “Leaving the Play”:
Nice cover.
 Aug 25, 2019, 21:13 EDT
Raum 
Thank you. My vocals were so monotone back then thoigh, you know?
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shiloh wangsgard 
Yes, I would say you have matured a lot with your vocals
flag (Aug 26, 2019, 09:04 EDT)
Raum 
I've gained a lot of confidence which really helps a lot.
flag (Aug 29, 2019, 22:20 EDT)


Crisp! Simply put, a really, really nice recording. Add some harmonies to it and then at the 'sing it with me' part maybe have a bunch of backing voices sing-along.

BUT THIS IS SOLID. Very, very honored by your smooth, smokin' rendition!!!

Also, sweet graphic! And your new profile picture is super-pro. Pumped!
 Aug 25, 2019, 22:14 EDT
Raum 
Thank you as always for those many compliments :)

You read my mind on the multible vocal harmomies im going to add but im going to record a better version because im wanting to practice it a bit more. Great tune, Shoham.
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Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
Thank you amigo! This could be the start of something BIG!!! [HIDDEN TRACK] https://www.feed-forward.net/w.7275_BIG
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Rex Yehudi (shoham) gave feedback to Raum for “Claim (Demo)”:
Middle section is very smooth -- very smooth, jazzy flip. Love where this is going.

RETRACTIVE FALACY?! What is this mystery message?!?

Could use a 16 note whistle solo from 2:08 to -2:13
 Aug 25, 2019, 22:23 EDT
Raum 
The phrase retractive fallacy is sonething im going to leave to soeculation. Ive been trying to play around with word-play more. Does it work?

Also for the solo am a tually arranging a proper guitar lead solo this very moment. Though im terrible at coming up/playong lead "its getting better all the time."
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shiloh wangsgard gave feedback to Raum for “Fingers On The Keys - Demo 2”:
Enjoyed your vocals performance on this way better than the first. Can't wait to hear what's next for this.
 Aug 21, 2019, 16:55 EDT

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