I like the high riff melodies but honestly if it had some 'major' chords in the middle/background it would really tie it together. there's a background synth that's faint and somewhat repetitive, but the repetitiveness is not a problem. If the pitch of that changed with the bass then it would be dope. Just a suggestion! I hope these suggestions aren't interpreted as your music not being good enough. I've just had a lot of trial and error over the years and people giving me honest feedback and seeing how it translates into the music. Hearing people interpret and critique my music was, for me, the quickest way to learn what will make heads move. I used to make really obscure music but I realized that most of it made sense in my head but not in other people's.
Let me know what you think LoKey!