Gabrielle gave feedback to Richard Shekari for “(deleted)”:
I can't keep up! I'm reading Anna the Human right now. One day I'll get to all of them . . .
 Feb 06, 2017, 20:03 EST
Richard Shekari 
Oh my, $Gabrieller I am literally on my knees :D I'm not intentionally trying to torture you :) I just can't help it too, gotta keep writing. I actually made it my new year resolution not to write any story this year but have written three aleady lol so I spoke to a certain fellow it and he said, "Get married, you won't even have time to breathe!" hah I still don't know what it means. happy new year, i hope you're doing just fine. I'm glad to know you're up on Anna the Human. I am more than honoured
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shoham gave feedback to Richard Shekari for “(deleted)”:
I thought I told you that we don't stop
I thought I told you that we don't stop..
 Feb 05, 2017, 08:44 EST
Richard Shekari 
(Turn Table scratches)
Baaad boy...oh bad boy....
lol I just can't help me, man.
Hope you're cool, i will try and keep it to two titles a month
flag (Feb 05, 2017, 10:07 EST)
shoham 
JAJAJAJA! Or do it in serial form so that I can digest the digest!! SAZ
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shoham gave feedback to Richard Shekari for “The War of Wars”:
You are inspiring me, man. I just got started w/this puppy but I had dreams last night about writing a Shekari style novella. Stay tuned for that and review of War of Wars! Shoham
 Jan 09, 2017, 09:53 EST
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Richard Shekari 
This is awesome, best finish this cause you've already made me taste its sweet exotic nectar.
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Richard Shekari 
If you did that in just five minutes then I am already scared, that's like a page work, man. Imagine what you would achieve in a day or a week, or say if you decide to take a month's project. And I love the concept. Looks fresh, and juicy
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shoham 
idupe! I have no discipline! Also why I struggle with production!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
flag (Jan 09, 2017, 11:24 EST)
shoham 
We've only just begun. 100% inspired by one Rex Razer: https://www.feed-forward.net/w.6689_Beatrix_Little_A_Serial_--_Part_1
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shoham gave feedback to Richard Shekari for “(deleted)”:
Getting into this thing now -- did you change anything since the last draft? I like how you are jumping back and forth in time. I'm still looking forward to getting to read it cover to cover i the next few days!!! Shoham
 Oct 07, 2016, 11:38 EDT
Richard Shekari 
Just a little change and some lines added to best smoothen it. Nothing much. Story still the same. Thanks a lot, you actually inspired me to write his one. I know you will be too busy to read haha
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Richard Shekari 
Hope you are doing good
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shoham 
I am just a slow reader of I would be done already. Never too busy for a fiend... Shoham
flag (Oct 08, 2016, 11:10 EDT)


Interesting poem with strong messages. Really made me think. It was difficult to tell if some were good or bad qualities like an "aura of danger"-I can't decide if that's good or bad!

Where did you get that cover art? It's odd/might give me nightmares!
 Jul 23, 2016, 23:34 EDT
Richard Shekari 
Oh wow thank you Gabrielle. I normally get my covers from pixabay.com their stuff are royalty free. I was told you got a question about my other work "Perils of Candy Cuthway"
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Richard Shekari 
"aura of danger"
You can look dangerous and yet be the nicest angel deep within, and you can look like the sweetest angel on the surface and yet be dark and evil deep within. I wouldn't wanna give an example of any country that possess the "aura of danger" face lol hope you are doing great
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shoham gave feedback to Richard Shekari for “(deleted)”:
All of the above!
 Jul 22, 2016, 07:49 EDT


pskave gave feedback to SkyPoint for “Love Time Ft Solid Star”:
Is that your tag line?
 Nov 24, 2015, 18:20 EST


shoham gave feedback to jude junior for “JDIM new hit song Tinni love”:
jude, you have to upload the audio file... or bad form...
 Sep 21, 2015, 19:23 EDT


shoham gave feedback to Richard Shekari for “(deleted)”:
Just bought a copy. Looking forward to reading the book.

One thing that I ave already noticed that I like, having flipped through and read a bit is that there is a lot of very strong imagery, throughout. I bit poetic!

Takes a songwriter to write a novel in this way!

Looking forward to reading more,
-$Shoham
 Jun 18, 2015, 12:01 EDT
Richard Shekari 
wow now i think i really don't deserve all these, i am speechless Shoham.
I lack words to express how i feel right now, wow!
i am so so so grateful...wow! thanks for your profound support
flag (Jun 18, 2015, 12:31 EDT)
shoham 
Artists need to work together man! One suggestion, some people don't have a PayPal, so consider aloowing people to buy with AC (Ad Credits as well). Just a thought. 1 Ad Credit is equal to about 10 cents (20 Naira). Pass it on... -Shoham
flag (Jun 18, 2015, 16:00 EDT)
Richard Shekari 
yes you are right but i haven't even checked how the AC stuff works
flag (Jun 18, 2015, 18:40 EDT)
shoham 
Well, try making an ad, with the credits you already have. Free. -S
flag (Jun 19, 2015, 16:45 EDT)


JZC gave feedback to Barbara for “Time”:
what a profound piece. I realized I commented on this 2 years ago, yes the past 2 years have gone so fast. would love to see some of your new work.
 May 27, 2014, 19:24 EDT