Gabrielle gave feedback to Richard Shekari for “(deleted)”:
I can't keep up! I'm reading Anna the Human right now. One day I'll get to all of them . . .
 Feb 06, 2017, 20:03 EST
Richard Shekari 
Oh my, $Gabrieller I am literally on my knees :D I'm not intentionally trying to torture you :) I just can't help it too, gotta keep writing. I actually made it my new year resolution not to write any story this year but have written three aleady lol so I spoke to a certain fellow it and he said, "Get married, you won't even have time to breathe!" hah I still don't know what it means. happy new year, i hope you're doing just fine. I'm glad to know you're up on Anna the Human. I am more than honoured
flag (Feb 07, 2017, 01:12 EST)


shoham gave feedback to Richard Shekari for “(deleted)”:
I thought I told you that we don't stop
I thought I told you that we don't stop..
 Feb 05, 2017, 08:44 EST
Richard Shekari 
(Turn Table scratches)
Baaad boy...oh bad boy....
lol I just can't help me, man.
Hope you're cool, i will try and keep it to two titles a month
flag (Feb 05, 2017, 10:07 EST)
shoham 
JAJAJAJA! Or do it in serial form so that I can digest the digest!! SAZ
flag (Feb 05, 2017, 13:06 EST)


shoham gave feedback to Richard Shekari for “The War of Wars”:
You are inspiring me, man. I just got started w/this puppy but I had dreams last night about writing a Shekari style novella. Stay tuned for that and review of War of Wars! Shoham
 Jan 09, 2017, 09:53 EST
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Richard Shekari 
This is awesome, best finish this cause you've already made me taste its sweet exotic nectar.
flag (Jan 09, 2017, 10:31 EST)
Richard Shekari 
If you did that in just five minutes then I am already scared, that's like a page work, man. Imagine what you would achieve in a day or a week, or say if you decide to take a month's project. And I love the concept. Looks fresh, and juicy
flag (Jan 09, 2017, 11:05 EST)
shoham 
idupe! I have no discipline! Also why I struggle with production!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
flag (Jan 09, 2017, 11:24 EST)
shoham 
We've only just begun. 100% inspired by one Rex Razer: https://www.feed-forward.net/w.6689_Beatrix_Little_A_Serial_--_Part_1
flag (Jan 09, 2017, 23:22 EST)


shoham gave feedback to Richard Shekari for “(deleted)”:
Great stuff! I wish I could read faster/had a better attention span! But I believe it is your best yet. Way to go, chum :)
 Dec 22, 2016, 18:08 EST
Richard Shekari 
Thanks mate. If don't get this mind busy, the devil will turn it into his playground. Lol thanks a lot, how is prep for Christmas over there. Funny thing is, people like me will be at work that day. #Rescue team
flag (Dec 23, 2016, 07:19 EST)
shoham 
True. Prep is going good -- I'm not religious, so it will be stress free hopefully! Maybe one of these days you'll get some time off!
flag (Dec 23, 2016, 09:34 EST)
Richard Shekari 
"Not religious!" aah we all use that line, I think my sisters and mom would be shock me leaving for work tomorrow while they toast to the season. Used to love it, age took it away.
No new stuff from you, haven't you recorded anything yet?
flag (Dec 24, 2016, 08:06 EST)
shoham 
Got something new on the way, Sho
flag (Dec 24, 2016, 14:51 EST)
shoham 
flag (Dec 24, 2016, 16:41 EST)


shoham gave feedback to Richard Shekari for “(deleted)”:
Does this man ever sleep? Just getting started on this one, but I can say that the first paragraph alone is VERY well written -- very nice use of descriptive language.
 Dec 21, 2016, 08:43 EST


Just finished this over the weekend-this one is my favorite so far-especially since it had an ending so I don't have to wait in suspense for part 2!

It was fun to imagine what all the characters would look like on a television show or movie. I think you had really great details that helped to make the story come to life.
 Dec 05, 2016, 18:40 EST
Richard Shekari 
Thank you so much for the review Gabrielle :) 1:30am here, just got home :D #long story.
Yeah this one def needs no sequel, but when I get lazy in the near future I'd cook it up. No stone was left unturned here, I hate part 2's and 3's too haha. I am glad you loved Aaricia and the Noland Army.
flag (Dec 05, 2016, 19:33 EST)


shoham gave feedback to Richard Shekari for “Aaricia and the Noland Army”:
I can't keep up, man! I'm going to try to get through the book in the next week or so. Thanks for the upload! $SHOHAM
 Nov 10, 2016, 09:17 EST
Richard Shekari 
Well, just sharing with the world that's all $Shoham
You don't need to read everything i put up, man. :)
Hope you're doing great
flag (Nov 10, 2016, 10:05 EST)
shoham 
I'm alright -- now we have a right wing hack as OUR federal executive too, so that's something we share with Nigeria!!!

Hey, we have some guys who are doing work in Uganda who are going to hopefully be active soon:

https://www.feed-forward.net/CIP_Uganda
flag (Nov 10, 2016, 12:12 EST)
Richard Shekari 
I see you guys and Nigeria share the same kind of thing now, the same way DT came to power is same way Buhari did too, watched it all on TV. Well, to be frank I didn't like the way B.O chose sides and was blasting DT openly, I expected a more mature stand by him. You know, be neutral and only encourage voters to come out but not to go about inciting and calling his race to come out and vote, I think that's a bad move to rain hate and division, coming from a leader like that. Naturally when the masses see that the elites stand against a particular candidate, they would go for him and vote him. Just like buhari, DT is
flag (Nov 11, 2016, 01:04 EST)
shoham 
I think Obama did a good job. Usually the parties stick together "be neutral and only encourage voters to come out" is not the American tradition. And there was a thought that Trump is too dangerous to just let go. But I think the incitement was from Trump. I also thought Clinton did a good job, but Trump muddied the waters so much and excited his 'race' so much that it helped take him over the top. Still, I believe that action-reaction rule holds true and that if the Republicans misplay their hand, it could be an unfortunate situation. Shoham
flag (Nov 11, 2016, 07:20 EST)
shoham 
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Gabrielle gave feedback to Richard Shekari for “(deleted)”:
Hi Richard,

So far I've read The Perils of Candy Cuthway, John Death, and Saving Rose Green. I think I like this one the best.
Hearing about terrorism on the news becomes an every day thing, so hearing a story about the individual people involved, even if it's fiction, made the story very powerful and made the characters relatable to real victims of terrorism.
 Nov 15, 2016, 18:33 EST
Richard Shekari 
This is one story that people keep wondering how I was able to put up even though it's a short one. Even some Arabs asked me whether I have been to the middle east before, told them nooooo.
I am glad you liked it. :D
flag (Nov 16, 2016, 00:42 EST)


shoham gave feedback to Richard Shekari for “(deleted)”:
Getting into this thing now -- did you change anything since the last draft? I like how you are jumping back and forth in time. I'm still looking forward to getting to read it cover to cover i the next few days!!! Shoham
 Oct 07, 2016, 11:38 EDT
Richard Shekari 
Just a little change and some lines added to best smoothen it. Nothing much. Story still the same. Thanks a lot, you actually inspired me to write his one. I know you will be too busy to read haha
flag (Oct 07, 2016, 11:42 EDT)
Richard Shekari 
Hope you are doing good
flag (Oct 07, 2016, 11:43 EDT)
shoham 
I am just a slow reader of I would be done already. Never too busy for a fiend... Shoham
flag (Oct 08, 2016, 11:10 EDT)


shoham gave feedback to Richard Shekari for “(deleted)”:
RS,

You write them faster than I can read them! Extraordinary. I am getting started on it now and have to say I am honored for the 'dead'ication shall we say?!?

I have to do a couple of things this afternoon but hope to read this all this week!

Thank you.
Sho
 Oct 06, 2016, 13:05 EDT