Nice, mellow song. Vocals sound good but muffled. Is that on purpose?

The title would suit best for a movie instead.
Dude, why do I have the feeling you and your guitar are inseparable. Hey, is this some kind of "SHOTAR"?
you know, SHOham, the relationship between a man and his lovely guiTAR?
You have a good voice for country songs. My problem is this: why do you starve the world of your talent?
Would you mind storming into one of the nearby studios and drop it like it's hot?!
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Just give me a token
Of love left unspoken
Your word has been broken for years
Just leave me a willow,
Eternities pillow.
I'd trade it for 10,000 tears
Or even a six pack of beers!
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now this is some good stuff, imagine sending this as a letter to a girl back in the '90s or so. Her heart would drool

It has begun ... i'd send ya a screenshot of new file but I can't find your e-mail.

LoFi yes, but so much potential here ... love the words (6pack of tears etc.) and nice chord progressions, especially in the choruses. I'd love to do a simple production of this one.

Great lyrics! Chords remind of Trouble Sleeping, particularly the bridge. Enjoying this little gem. Seems like working on the Trump album is also helping your regular output. Good detour from recent demos. Digging it. Can see this being fleshed out all waltzy with lots of shakers and stuff. Nice work Sho

Also, what accent is that when you say, "pillewww" around 1:14? JK/NK

Is this guy dead or alive? I like the lyrics. "Just leave me a willow,
Eternities pillow." Maybe I'm analyzing it too much, but people are buried under willows, but how does someone leave you a willow?

A good end-of-album track. Nice percussive guitar track, too.

It makes someone feel hurt when your lover one tells you it's the end. That's a cool song. It sound since.

Hy octavio. I am enjoying your song. Are you a guitarist? I like your song.