Gabrielle gave feedback to The Middlemen for “It Brings me Back”:
Nice, mellow song. Vocals sound good but muffled. Is that on purpose?
 Jul 03, 2019, 18:58 EDT
The Middlemen 
This was from the strokes era - when producing songs that sounded like garage made on purpose was the rage! Also we have starstruck and no reply in that vain. Thank you.
flag (Jul 05, 2019, 18:07 EDT)


The title would suit best for a movie instead.
Dude, why do I have the feeling you and your guitar are inseparable. Hey, is this some kind of "SHOTAR"?
you know, SHOham, the relationship between a man and his lovely guiTAR?
You have a good voice for country songs. My problem is this: why do you starve the world of your talent?
Would you mind storming into one of the nearby studios and drop it like it's hot?!
****
Just give me a token
Of love left unspoken
Your word has been broken for years
Just leave me a willow,
Eternities pillow.
I'd trade it for 10,000 tears
Or even a six pack of beers!
****
now this is some good stuff, imagine sending this as a letter to a girl back in the '90s or so. Her heart would drool
 Dec 30, 2016, 05:12 EST
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Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
I hear ya. Well, I gave up on the musical about a month ago, just for fun at the time. So maybe the new song "Don't Piss on My Tombstone"? Shoham
flag (Jan 28, 2017, 11:23 EST)
Richard Shekari 
I've got a suggestion for you...next song title...
immigration!
hahaha
flag (Feb 05, 2017, 10:11 EST)
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
NONONONO. I'm done with politics for now, remember!? JAJAJAJAJA!
flag (Feb 05, 2017, 13:06 EST)


It has begun ... i'd send ya a screenshot of new file but I can't find your e-mail.
 Feb 07, 2017, 17:56 EST


LoFi yes, but so much potential here ... love the words (6pack of tears etc.) and nice chord progressions, especially in the choruses.

I'd love to do a simple production of this one.
 Jan 17, 2017, 01:28 EST
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Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
gotcha
flag (Jan 23, 2017, 16:18 EST)
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
bruv, it exceeded file limits for your account! But why not download the one I have here, it's lossless this way..... thank you! $shoham
flag (Jan 23, 2017, 16:26 EST)
tawmy 
Ok will download at home ... may not be for a few days ... lossless is good ... ThanX Bro
flag (Jan 23, 2017, 18:18 EST)
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
I'll have none of it -- thankXXX to youuuuuuuuuuuuuuu.
flag (Jan 23, 2017, 19:32 EST)


Great lyrics! Chords remind of Trouble Sleeping, particularly the bridge.

Enjoying this little gem.

Seems like working on the Trump album is also helping your regular output. Good detour from recent demos.

Digging it. Can see this being fleshed out all waltzy with lots of shakers and stuff. Nice work Sho
 Dec 31, 2016, 15:36 EST
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
Thanks bro. "Can see this being fleshed out all waltzy with lots of shakers and stuff." That sounds like a plan... -- There might just be a pocket full of new years ac in it for you.....
flag (Jan 01, 2017, 09:29 EST)
Gremlin 
Haha little did I know I was foreshadowing my own future...I am a slave to AC
flag (Jan 01, 2017, 11:19 EST)
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
Yes, yes.....!
flag (Jan 01, 2017, 18:22 EST)


Also, what accent is that when you say, "pillewww" around 1:14? JK/NK
 Dec 27, 2016, 09:15 EST
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
just a 'happy accident' ty
flag (Dec 28, 2016, 11:11 EST)


Is this guy dead or alive?

I like the lyrics.

"Just leave me a willow,
Eternities pillow."

Maybe I'm analyzing it too much, but people are buried under willows, but how does someone leave you a willow?
 Dec 27, 2016, 09:13 EST
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
Thank you, $gabrielle. Is he dead or alive? I think he is dying (aren't we all???). Maybe like a willow branch -- in remembrance.... Or, the lover could plant a tree? Is it a pillow if it's on top of you and not below? These are the questions we must ask.

Thank you again for your Feedback. -Shoham
flag (Dec 27, 2016, 13:15 EST)


Rex Yehudi (shoham) gave feedback to Gremlin for “The Floods”:
A good end-of-album track. Nice percussive guitar track, too.
 Jul 11, 2016, 16:48 EDT
Gremlin 
Thanks. I had a full fleshed out version of this one for an album I scrapped after a drive crash. Complete with corny storm sound fx, oh and some crickets and frog noises. Never had a final master uploaded though. Heres the version with the test vocal, back before I learned (kinda) how to sing https://soundcloud.com/sleepingships/the-floods-came
flag (Aug 01, 2016, 10:42 EDT)
Gremlin 
Heres an old Alex track from the same sessions. I knew nothing about recording obviously, still only a novice over 5 yrs later https://soundcloud.com/sleepingships/just-the-way-it-seems
flag (Aug 01, 2016, 10:48 EDT)


heavysounds gave feedback to The Middlemen for “The End”:
It makes someone feel hurt when your lover one tells you it's the end. That's a cool song. It sound since.
 Apr 29, 2016, 11:05 EDT
The Middlemen 
Painful memories. Great Feedback. Free download!
flag (Apr 29, 2016, 11:08 EDT)


Hy octavio. I am enjoying your song. Are you a guitarist? I like your song.
 Feb 24, 2016, 02:35 EST
0ctavio G0nzalez 
yes, i play guitar and write -- i have some poetry too -- this one is popular: https://www.feed-forward.net/w.2675_stlv1.2_ are you a singer?
flag (Feb 24, 2016, 14:06 EST)