Gremlin gave feedback to Alice Hagenbruch for “(deleted)”:
This song to me has a bit of an Alice in Chains circa Jar of Flies mixed a bit with some of the early Bob Mould solo records like Black Sheets of Rain or something and then topped with some Joni Mitchell. Nice work. Keep the demos coming :D
 Jul 20, 2015, 15:21 EDT
Alice Hagenbruch 
Oh thank you :)
Right now I'm recording my debut album Morula. It will keep the same attitude like this demo, but it also will have a lot of different styles.
Stay tuned
Alice
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shoham gave feedback to Alice Hagenbruch for “(deleted)”:
Alice,

Powerful voice, powerful lyrics. I imagine that this is a relatively early draft for your album that you mention in that notes. One thing that I hope you will add is a bit more of a drive from the right hand, especially if you are accompanying yourself/without a band. I am a singer/songwriter too. I know that it is a lot of hard work. Kudos to you for putting it in, and it is already paying off!

PS: If you don't have PayPal, sell it for Ads, I would buy a copy.

Thank you for sharing,
-Sho
 Jul 13, 2015, 15:59 EDT
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Alice Hagenbruch 
This week I will start recording with my team. I really would love to play in Pittsburgh, I just don't know if I could effort the flight.
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shoham 
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Alice Hagenbruch 
Hm 400 is a very good price, maybe I can manage somehow to come.
flag (Jul 14, 2015, 09:34 EDT)
shoham 
Hope a plane. You'll have places to stay -- Pittsburgh, and of course with Darryl ;)
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Richard Shekari gave feedback to Alice Hagenbruch for “(deleted)”:
great work alice, got you on soundcloud and liked your fb page too. kudos
 Jul 13, 2015, 16:13 EDT
Alice Hagenbruch 
Thanks a lot! I hope you have good day/night :)
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Gabrielle gave feedback to Xack Fischer for “One Dedication”:
This song is really good- probably because it's a very real and sad subject. Creative lyrics, too. If you perform live, I think this one would sound good.
 Feb 10, 2014, 17:49 EST


Gabrielle gave feedback to Xack Fischer for “American Dreamer”:
I like the lyrics- especially "for every one star there’s a million not mentioned
they all tried really hard, and they all really meant it"

Catchy beat, too. How long did it take you to write it?
 Feb 10, 2014, 17:39 EST
Xack Fischer 
The melody and the first few lines of the song actually popped into my head while I was at a 7/11 and I jotted them down onto my notepad, then I went home and wrote the whole song that night. Thanks for listening!
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shoham gave feedback to Xack Fischer for “American Dreamer”:
I love the production value, dude :)

Cool lyrics, as well. What can I see, kid? You are ready for prime-time, for sure. I like this very simple percussion as well. How exactly are you producing it? I imagine that it was something simple, natural that you then looped. Is that right?

Anthemic.

Thank you kindly for sharing,
-Shoham
 Feb 09, 2014, 07:38 EST
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Xack Fischer 
No loop, just played it through.
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shoham 
That is cool, man! Dedication to the craft :]
flag (Feb 09, 2014, 17:51 EST)
Xack Fischer 
Since you seem interested, I'll walk you through how I get my recordings to sound clean.
First I record a track of me playing the song on guitar and singing while I listen to a metronome on headphones. Then I usually listen to it for a few days and make any revisions, then I do it again with the second draft.
Then I record the guitar part(s) and the vocals on separate tracks, while I listen to the original recording on headphones.
And then when I have those tracks, I delete the first recording I did, so the vocals and guitar are isolated from each other. That way I can adjust their volumes, play with different effects for the different sounds (like autotune or echoes, whatever).
Percussion is always the last thing I add onto a track, and I tend to just use whatever in within arms reach to record percussions. Usually I have 2 or 3 different simple rhythms on top of each other. This track has 3 different rhythms overlapped.
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shoham 
Awesome. I have to bookmark this :) I like the idea of percussion last...
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shoham gave feedback to Xack Fischer for “One Dedication”:
Funny track, Xack. Kind of sad too at the same time. Always good to hear your voice, man...
 Feb 03, 2014, 18:40 EST


shoham gave feedback to Xack Fischer for “Clark Kent”:
Great use of Autotune.
 Nov 28, 2013, 16:56 EST
Xack Fischer 
Thanks. It was a last minute choice to use it, but I think it really works well.
flag (Nov 28, 2013, 17:07 EST)
shoham 
I do as well. Enjoyed the lyrics too. Keep them-a-comin :)
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Gabrielle gave feedback to Xack Fischer for “Complications”:
This one is my favorite of your new ones. I think the vocals sound best, and it has a bit more texture/complexity than the other 3. All 4 have really creative lyrics!
 Jun 27, 2013, 18:17 EDT


shoham gave feedback to Xack Fischer for “Complications”:
"but I think that it's my path
I've been working it out and double checking my math
I've added it up, and divided by two
I don't think that I'm meant to end up with you"

A great quatrain. Something of an Ogden Nash quality to it...

I think the buh, buh, buh's should be "love, love, love", but in that same dejected voice. Thanks, X, -Z
 Jun 26, 2013, 15:13 EDT
Xack Fischer 
I love love love that idea and I am absolutely going to change it.
flag (Jun 26, 2013, 15:16 EDT)
shoham 
Wow! I am pumped that it works for you! Anything I can do for a fellow artist and songwriter is my pleasure :[o]
flag (Jun 26, 2013, 15:18 EDT)
Xack Fischer 
Look for your name in the liner notes if I ever put out an album! ;)
flag (Jun 26, 2013, 15:23 EDT)
shoham 
awesome! i would be honored, and i hope you reach that goal!
:[0] -saz
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