Gabrielle gave feedback to Marco Alamilla for “A tech”:
I like this one the best of the ones you just posted. Looks like man frozen into blocks of ice.
 Jul 21, 2019, 17:56 EDT
Marco Alamilla 
Thanks
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Rex Yehudi (shoham) gave feedback to Richard Shekari for “Your Promises”:
Sweet guitar solo in the middle -- how did you record or that? Did you use a software?
 Jul 17, 2019, 17:51 EDT
Richard Shekari 
Thanks man. I cooked the instrumental with FL and vocal recording with adobe Audion. So yes, every bit and piece of it is software. 😁
are you saying I'm getting good at it? Hehe
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Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
I need to get you on my production team!
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Richard Shekari 
I'm flattered 😁
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Gabrielle gave feedback to Richard Shekari for “All the nations”:
An oldie but goodie. Very upbeat, and I like the cover art a lot! When did you start writing songs?
 Jul 21, 2019, 18:04 EDT
Richard Shekari 
hi, Gabrielle.
Thanks a lot for the listen.
It sure is an old song, Evey song I sang and recorded were were written by me. Started music way back 2002 but they were mostly rap songs and you know how dirty it gets Verbally and lyrically with Hip-hop haha.
Been a while, hope you're doing just fine
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Is this a two-man band? I like this one. Very boppy.
 Jul 21, 2019, 18:01 EDT


That's Fire right there. Lots of weird throughout your stuff. Thank you. Shoham
 Jul 20, 2019, 12:17 EDT


Great rhythm track.... On another note, I forgot about the shortlinkin... How did you figure out you hacker you? What does it mean 'street sweeper', I'm probably missing the obvious meaning but I'm not on top of my game right now ;)

Also, it's weird because I think the other vocals are 90% as good as this but these are better/good/gooder. Still, I am always like "This track of mine is AWESOME" and then someone else is like "Amateur Hour" and vice versa...!
 Jul 19, 2019, 15:24 EDT
Gremlin 
Thanks man. Oh I think I went to delete it and there was an option that said are you sure you want to delete it or do you want to upload a revised version and I selected that. Um basically just a commentary on our lives at the moment. The road that we’re on is full of hate...we could use a street sweeper to clear all that out and make way for the love. It’s admittedly a silly concept. Yea they sounded fine to me until I listened back on monitors and then I realized oh crap and re-recorded them. It’s not a dramatic diff but it annoyed me. Haha same for me man
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Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
Makes sense. "We Can Work It OUT" LennyMack references etc. Not to be "That guy", but I did a song about a week ago and it's an 'OK' recording which also has a similar reference to the MerseyMen: https://www.feed-forward.net/w.7235_The_Paperclip_Song_I_Make_the_Time_For_Y

I used some microtonal singing techniques, just trying to play around with some things. The rhythmic, lyric, and guitar flubs are just flubs, but the vocals are supposed to be that way for the most part.

OK, now the shortlink makes sense. oh, $will always with the golden nuggets ;)
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A lot of vulgarity. Some writers do this for shock value, I guess. Maybe put a cover page with a warning on it at the very least.
 Jul 18, 2019, 20:19 EDT
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
in 1952.
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Rex Yehudi (shoham) gave feedback to Gremlin for “Street Sweeper”:
Weird tune -- in a good way -- street sweeper eh? Here's a rube-goldberg-ish piece of cover art for it:

Illustrirte Zeitung (1843) 06 006 1 Whitworth's Straßenreinigungsmaschine.PNG
 Jul 06, 2019, 15:28 EDT


Gabrielle gave feedback to The Middlemen for “It Brings me Back”:
Nice, mellow song. Vocals sound good but muffled. Is that on purpose?
 Jul 03, 2019, 18:58 EDT
The Middlemen 
This was from the strokes era - when producing songs that sounded like garage made on purpose was the rage! Also we have starstruck and no reply in that vain. Thank you.
flag (Jul 05, 2019, 18:07 EDT)


Is this about Jesus? Left the market fleeced-cause he's the lamb . .. the Lamb of God.
 Jul 03, 2019, 19:02 EDT
Rex Yehudi (shoham) 
Are all my newer songs???!!! 0.o -- "The bread is gone, the bottle's dry"...? It's mostly about guys like 'Indiana Jones Hat' etc. in that age group and also people who do stuff to get it off their checklist or "Bucketlist" -- other titles considered were "Bucketlist Berry" and "Todo List Tim"
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