shoham gave feedback to Kyle (Raum) Cole for “Psychedelic Jamble”:
Dope tracks. I'm going through them now. Is this all you or are you working with someone. Drums are solid, simple. I like simple drums -- it lets everyone else get on the same groove and work together. I like the twang you get on the end of this track. Cool.
 May 16, 2017, 08:39 EDT
Kyle (Raum) Cole 
It's actually my drum machine built into a pedal, I call him sticks.
flag (May 19, 2017, 15:42 EDT)
shoham 
It's simple. I like that. Any thought on expanding on my new mackattack?
flag (May 20, 2017, 11:18 EDT)


shoham gave feedback to Kode of Bliss for “Trauma and Torment of Truth”:
Cool melody from 1:40 onward. I am enjoying this maturation in your composition and especially the patience in developing a melody like this one. Has a sonata like feel in the outro, although I'm not sure that I am buying the sound effects at the way end.

Tasteful choice of instrumentation as well. We're along way from Thorn of Xan: https://www.feed-forward.net/w.2447_Thorn_of_Xan_Spine_Mix_&market
 Apr 22, 2017, 19:32 EDT
Kode of Bliss 
I think this is one of my best all around tracks.
flag (May 06, 2017, 11:34 EDT)
shoham 
rise above. you're just getting started in this music game :) Shoham
flag (May 08, 2017, 09:36 EDT)
shoham 
Weird little early Memorial day lo-fi track. What do you think of it? https://www.feed-forward.net/w.6833_Are_You_Coming_Back_to_Pittsburgh_Dont_D
flag (May 18, 2017, 11:42 EDT)


shoham gave feedback to Richard Shekari for “Good Morning”:
Nice beat, Rex. I like the new cover art for this track. Big fan of the fade-out as well, my favorite way to end a track. + message, Thank you, Sho
 May 14, 2017, 11:32 EDT
Omitted 3 posts.
Richard Shekari 
No, maybe it's because I am not into sports. That's good news, people like that give us hope for sure. My younger brother is a sport fanatic so i think he might have heard about the mega dude.
flag (May 16, 2017, 03:56 EDT)
shoham 
Yeah, ask your brother, or maybe it wasn't such a big story there as it was here?
flag (May 16, 2017, 07:59 EDT)
Richard Shekari 
nigerians only care about soccer when it comes to sports and a little bit of basketball...baseball to us is like a grass offered to a hungry lion lol get it?
flag (May 16, 2017, 10:44 EDT)
shoham 
jajaja! still, it could bring the continent some 'pride' -- do YOU get it???? JAJAJAJA!
flag (May 16, 2017, 10:55 EDT)


shoham gave feedback to Kyle (Raum) Cole for “Close The Door”:
Has a 1968 MerseySide sound -- yeah baby! What's the political motivation? I couldn't decode the message. Sho
 May 16, 2017, 10:07 EDT


Oh man this is a great one indeed. Did you write this? If so these lyrics are gold and could use this as an example of what I would like to strive for in lyrics.

They flow and feel so natural.
 May 16, 2017, 06:18 EDT
shoham 
Hey man. Wow, thanks. Yeah, these are my guys. Not the best recording, but I am glad you dig them. You could cover the track? Actually just yesterday I was working on a new track in your honor -- some fun surprises if I can get around to recording --maybe a first draft today now that I've got some motivation!

Thanks again man, really appreciate the listen and ++ feedback! Shoham
flag (May 16, 2017, 08:02 EDT)
shoham 
OK. I did it -- just now and just for you kid. Very rough, very hush hush... White album outtake quality?!?!? JAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJ!
https://www.feed-forward.net/w.6832_Big_Mackattack_very_rough_1st_.25_for_Ra
flag (May 16, 2017, 08:32 EDT)


Kyle (Raum) Cole gave feedback to shoham for “Slice (featuring Sho)”:
Really nice electronic tune you got going!

Feeling like the vocals are a bit naked and could use an effect possibly?
 May 16, 2017, 06:15 EDT
shoham 
$ryantoth wrote the original https://www.feed-forward.net/w.6808_slice I need to do a better job with my recording(s) not my strength!
flag (May 16, 2017, 08:03 EDT)


shoham gave feedback to Kyle (Raum) Cole for “I Don't Know”:
Keep exploring the opening chord changes. And slow down the lyrics. Let the vocals and lyrics flow over these changes more naturally. I know you were in a hurry to get it on wax, but for the next take, I want it more fluid, especially the vocals.

And again, let the guitar do most of the heavy lifting, John Boy! JAJAJAJA!
 May 10, 2017, 07:32 EDT


shoham gave feedback to Kyle (Raum) Cole for “I Need You”:
Leave it to you to come up with a cover of a deep cut Harrisong! iJAJAJAJAJAJA! I knid of love the "I quit. Can't remember the bloody lyrics and chords" attitude at the end. Punk rock ethic. JA!
 May 10, 2017, 07:30 EDT


shoham gave feedback to Kyle (Raum) Cole for “Song Concept”:
It's a good concept. Be bolder, braver. Weirder! With your chord selection, especially. Especially on this one. Make me go "WHAT THE F*NK". Otherwise, it's a decent start. Sho
 May 09, 2017, 14:45 EDT
Kyle (Raum) Cole 
Noted Shoh, thank you.
flag (May 09, 2017, 16:33 EDT)
shoham 
flag (May 09, 2017, 17:25 EDT)


shoham gave feedback to Ryan Toth for “meh”:
Groovy. My new goto theme/meme for reviewing this kind of techno track is "reminds me of Kraftwerk". So, here we go: reminds me of Kraftwerk..

Also, I can kind of see a Flight of the Concords kind of parody of a Kraftwerk track coming out of this. I might have to give it a go ;)*

Danke,
Shoham
* Early lyrical hook 'spit in my face, whole human race, spit in my face...'
 May 09, 2017, 14:49 EDT

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