shoham gave feedback to Kyle (Raum) Cole for “Better Man Demo”:
I like the unison vocals. Has a late 50s early 60s feel.

I think you should emphasize the minor chords a little more by changing the strum pattern when you change chords.

Then, I would extend those better man call and response lines in the outro, like a cannon or a round:

https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Round_(music)
 Jan 16, 2019, 10:52 EST
Kyle (Raum) Cole 
I agree. So you think I’m on right track?
flag (Jan 16, 2019, 15:09 EST)
shoham 
push the envelope
flag (Jan 16, 2019, 19:11 EST)
Kyle (Raum) Cole 
Understood. Wish I had you here with me so we can write together.
flag (Jan 16, 2019, 22:22 EST)
shoham 
flag (Jan 17, 2019, 12:35 EST)


shoham gave feedback to Gremlin for “Bloody Hombres”:
It would be a challenge, but I think you should try to couple thia style with some lyrics. Nice find!
 Jan 15, 2019, 16:55 EST
Gremlin 
Haha that would be nuts!! I actually found like about 8-9 more. Might upload them all and make it an album on here. In case the discs get lost bc there IS no other back up LOL. Once those are gone, they are gone for good.
flag (Jan 16, 2019, 11:47 EST)
shoham 
we are the salt mines of an age
flag (Jan 16, 2019, 19:12 EST)
Gremlin 
Like sands through the hourglass, so are the musical periods of our lives...
flag (Jan 17, 2019, 11:08 EST)


Richard Shekari gave feedback to Gremlin for “So Far Gone”:
I looouoooooooooooooooove this
 Dec 14, 2018, 00:31 EST
Gremlin 
Thank you my friend. Couldnt find my harmonica so this one will get rerecorded eventually
flag (Jan 16, 2019, 13:03 EST)


Kyle (Raum) Cole gave feedback to Kyle (Raum) Cole for “Better Man Demo”:
Also started a Beatle's reivew channel.

https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC3HIwVT5z1TOavRVccV8elQ/
 Jan 15, 2019, 22:25 EST


shoham gave feedback to Kyle (Raum) Cole for “You’re My Baby”:
I think the drums sound decent. Always a tough decision between being polished and being raw...
 Jan 06, 2019, 11:04 EST
Kyle (Raum) Cole 
Yeah that’s my dilemma right now. I kind of want to start working more on production quality.
flag (Jan 06, 2019, 12:01 EST)
shoham 
you and me both. It is 10% laziness, 90% anxiety, on my end, but the two are related. I have some good experiecnes taking production seriously and some bad ones - you can push to hard and end up with something just as bad as a half baked product, ya know?! I'm going to try to do at least 1 good one this year -- like a 20 hour track type of thing. See if it is worth it and go from there... Keep on pushing! Shoham
flag (Jan 06, 2019, 13:48 EST)


shoham gave feedback to Kyle (Raum) Cole for “You’re My Baby”:
I love this space age theremin sound staring at 1:30 or so. Only needs a killer bassline and this will be a sensation 4 sure!
 Jan 04, 2019, 10:04 EST
Kyle (Raum) Cole 
Yeah I wanted baseline too but was getting late. Need to get a new cord for pro mic and then I got a few projects I will be working on. Going to be recording my songs I have written down and also start recording reviews for anything Beatles on YouTube.

Do the drums sound too off or anything Shoham? I’m not a drummer.
flag (Jan 04, 2019, 12:59 EST)


great work there Kyle
 Jan 03, 2019, 05:23 EST


Richard Shekari gave feedback to J. Wager for “Shady Elm”:
classic
very classic
keep up the good work
 Jan 03, 2019, 05:18 EST


Richard Shekari gave feedback to Brian Vaughn for “Revolutions”:
Love the harmonics on that vocal, great piece man
 Jan 03, 2019, 05:16 EST


Richard Shekari gave feedback to tawmy for “ToGetHer LOVE”:
mouth organ one of my fav tunes,your husky voice laid on this instrumental is classic Tawny. keep up the good work
 Jan 03, 2019, 05:14 EST