shoham gave feedback to tawmy for “Over and Over”:
I'm not buying the vocals. It's a nice groove though for sure. I mean with the vox though I'm trapped between "OK Tom Waits Jr" and "Oh no Oscar the Grouch", but I really feel like a better vocal track would do more justice to this tune.

Who did you get to do that guitar track Stevie Ray Vaughn????
 Sep 25, 2017, 14:57 EDT
tawmy 
Thanks Shoham ... I was trying to unify the vocals with "ToGeHer Love' and 'Know Where To Run' , my other reworked blues pieces.
I have several well known 'shredders' that I work with to add the tasty guitar parts.
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shoham gave feedback to Gremlin for “Call Her Caroline (DEMO)”:
Needs bass. Bah-na-na-na-na....
 Sep 26, 2017, 11:39 EDT
shoham 
And like a keyboard interlude -- Bacharachesque...
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shoham gave feedback to Kyle (Raum) Cole for “On a Shelf (Demo)”:
Has a confessional feel to it.
I did not like this at all at first, but it's really got a Holden Caulfield *No room for phonies* ethic to it.
 Sep 26, 2017, 09:49 EDT


shoham gave feedback to Gremlin for “21st Century Misery”:
Weird track -- in a good way. Has a French sensibility somehow -- like an existential crisis in both the music and the lyrics. They match.

Hey, do you know this track? I just heard it on an independent station, it's from 2005:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jTW0y6kazWM
 Sep 25, 2017, 13:18 EDT
Gremlin 

Those chords are weird. Came up with them a few years ago. Maybe as far back as 2013 as it was going to be a track on an abandoned Sleeping Ships concept album. Never really had lyrics that fit the mood til recently. This the revised version after years of editing hah.

I have not. Will check er out
flag (Sep 25, 2017, 13:40 EDT)
shoham 
DID I SAY IT SOUNDED FRENCH!?!?! Interesting sounding book. What are the chords or is that proprietary?
flag (Sep 25, 2017, 14:26 EDT)
Gremlin 
Haha I know. It actually wasnt inspired by that but I have read it. Not something you want to read unless in a happy state of mind, although it is funny at times (maybe just to me and my warped view).

Not proprietary, just not sure of the names. Guitar tuned full step down. First chord is the oddest. It is a C shape, but instead of fingering second fret on D string, finger the first, and instead of first fret on the B string, finger the 3rd. Root is a A# I guess. Then just go up and down between A# and F note on 3rd fret of sixth string. Second chord is Bmaj9 with similar bouncing up and down in the bass.

Prechorus type part is G#maj to G#7, up to C#maj7 then bouncing to C#dim every now and then. On the third time through, after the G#7, it goes to Fmaj then Cdim then to the chorus chords

Chorus chords are F#minor6 to D#minor7 back to the weird A# chord from the verses/opening (maybe having actually taken theory and stuff youll know the name of it as I do not hah)

The 21st century for me arpeggio part is hard to explain. I dont have a guitar handy so forget the fingering for that. Ill get back to you!
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tawmy gave feedback to WalaWalaWala for “Catch Me If I Fall (Live)”:
I love the ambience and the groove.
 Sep 23, 2017, 03:00 EDT
WalaWalaWala 
This was a fun night! Thanks for checking us out :) FREE DOWNLOAD!
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tawmy 
Will do ... thanX to U !
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WalaWalaWala gave feedback to tawmy for “ToGetHer LOVE”:
Love the play on words. Great blues!
 Sep 24, 2017, 08:45 EDT


tawmy gave feedback to ernest txonyikeyz for “Shake it”:
Fun rhythms ... nice vocals ... good production.
 Sep 23, 2017, 03:07 EDT
ernest txonyikeyz 
Thanks... Like your instrumentals
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tawmy gave feedback to Gremlin for “4th of July (Fireworks)”:
I Love This ! ... great song... good production.. I often don't like my voice either so I change it up as much as I can. I am also somewhat of a misanthrope at times ... the more humans I meet, the more I love my dog !
 Sep 23, 2017, 05:19 EDT
Gremlin 
I liked how this one turned out. A big dumb rock song but with some major 7ths thrown in there to keep it interesting
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tawmy gave feedback to Gremlin for “Easy/Hard”:
Great catchy tune ... nice vocals and lyrics, great strumming of awesome chord changes after verse drone ... good twist in the bridge finale' too.
 Sep 23, 2017, 02:55 EDT
Gremlin 
Thanks Tawmy! I always liked this song. Came together really quickly, had chords, first verse, and chorus written within 15 mins one morning.

It is interesting the two tunes you commented on have very similar lyrics. I wrote them back to back. I thought it would be interesting to have songs where the verses are juxtapositions (here each like starts with either " so easy" or "so hard" where in 4th of July is "like heaven" or "like hell")
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Gremlin 
each line* my apologies
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shoham gave feedback to tawmy for “(deleted)”:
Groovy beat. Is this a new direction for you, man? This is I think your strongest vocal track to date, in my opinion. Awesome cover too -- is that Sasquatch??

Love the electric/mellow guitar outro.
 Sep 23, 2017, 14:16 EDT