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“The Lonely One”

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by shiloh wangsgard

I laid with you in the fold. I listen to you dream below. Watched you through false ember that glowed. Then saw you shiver from your demons cold. The burden heavy, Your words are cross. Shame me, then give my feelings a toss. Said I was the one. The future I could count on. Said you wanted us to be a love. The hope you never bleed from. Then...no heart or soul, So I chose to let you go. Continue to play your drum. The drum of The Lonely One. Click to see full text

▼ Genres: Other Writing, Poetry

Thanks to the encouragement of a new friend.

Date uploaded: Aug 30, 2019, 20:59 EDT Show more info

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