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“Sitting alone in a dimly lit room (Act 1, Scene 1+)”

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by shoham

Sitting alone in a dimly lit room, an anxious man, head in hand, listens to the radio from an old record player The radio plays: Charlie: "Are our children falling behind? A new study shows that American kids rank 258th out of 5,273 sovereign, independent nations in the core four "DAMP" arts: that's Drama -- including film, dance and the like. Art -- that's visual art like painting and sculpture. Music -- including music composition, lyricism, and song craft. And lastly Poetry, and other forms of creative writing. So what say you Eleanor? Can our kids catch back up? Can America be no. 1 again? Or, are we doomed to languish forever in mediocrity? Is this all a political ploy to boost stock prices for the big 12? More importantly, what does it all mean for the future geopolitical, economic, and military primacy of the United States of America?" Eleanor: "Look Charlie, countries like South Sudan and Armenia are so far ahead of us right now, it's not even funny. We should be afraid, we should be acting NOW, and if we're not careful, we're going to end up like China and India. DAMP is the past, DAMP is the present, and DAMP is the future." Charlie: "Correct. What say you Mort?" Mort: "America can, must, and WILL catch up with these other countries in the core four. Fundamentally, I agree with Eleanor. DAMP is the catchword, but the spirit is what matters here. And the spirit i Click to see full text

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