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Ode on Influence
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0ctavio G0nzalez
When I am weak, and cannot move The light does bring the ill to me And I can see in powers that prove That there is still much strength to be. Again I leave my restful state To help a friend I've heard has cried. Never slowed by words of hate. Hearing none- save the infinite guide... She shall lead me home, Though I must 1st serve all was made (...chaotic schemes as yet unkown...) My ignorance shall surely fade... -As truth into my soul is thrust- Until The Day: In Faith I Trust.
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Sonnet
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John Donne
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Mystic
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Sorry for bad English :(
Date uploaded: Aug 28, 2011, 08:18 EDT
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Rex Yehudi (shoham)
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0ctavio G0nzalez
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Ode on Influence
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Deep thoughts! Kind of reminds me of Jihn Donne's Holy Sonnets. Were you inspired by them?
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Apr 06, 2016, 12:22 EDT
0ctavio G0nzalez
John Donne? That was an inspiration for sure. For the set:
https://www.feed-forward.net/a.1125_Unholy_Sonnets
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J. Wager
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0ctavio G0nzalez
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very deep, fine work
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May 29, 2013, 12:33 EDT
0ctavio G0nzalez
grazi.
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Gary Smith
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0ctavio G0nzalez
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i really like the last 2 lines of this.
good work
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Jun 16, 2012, 00:50 EDT
0ctavio G0nzalez
thanks, man -- there's more where that cane from too:
http://www.feed-forward.net/a.1125_Unholy_Sonnets
Still working on some more 5 is not enough... Maybe 13! Lol. Thanks again, man.
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Gary Smith
yea there all good
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(Sep 15, 2012, 17:22 EDT)
0ctavio G0nzalez
coo. thanks :)
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